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This abyss slept deep below the earth, yet it was filled with much more artificial light than the tunnel. That was thanks to the construction lights set up here and there.
 
This abyss slept deep below the earth, yet it was filled with much more artificial light than the tunnel. That was thanks to the construction lights set up here and there.
   
It was easily more than 250 meters across and maybe more than twice as deep. The perfectly circular space made of reinforced concrete at the very bottom may have reminded different people of different things.
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It was easily more than 250m across and maybe more than twice as deep. The perfectly circular space made of reinforced concrete at the very bottom may have reminded different people of different things.
   
 
Some might see it as a common utility duct, a circular colosseum, a switchyard’s turntable, or an underground temple dedicated to a god one must never offer any prayers.
 
Some might see it as a common utility duct, a circular colosseum, a switchyard’s turntable, or an underground temple dedicated to a god one must never offer any prayers.
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Concrete columns were installed at even intervals around the edges, but there were none in the central circle. The flat concrete floor had a smaller circle built into it. That would rotate to change the train’s direction. The tracks outside the circle extended in 12 different directions. That made it all look like something else: a giant metal flower.
 
Concrete columns were installed at even intervals around the edges, but there were none in the central circle. The flat concrete floor had a smaller circle built into it. That would rotate to change the train’s direction. The tracks outside the circle extended in 12 different directions. That made it all look like something else: a giant metal flower.
   
Yes, there were tracks, signal lights, transformers, maintenance equipment, a control room, and a fifteen-car train in here. It was a freight train.
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Yes, there were tracks, signal lights, transformers, maintenance equipment, a control room, and a 15-car train in here. It was a freight train.
   
 
“That’s the dark side’s lifeline?”
 
“That’s the dark side’s lifeline?”
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After descending the last flight of stairs, they arrived at the deepest depths.
 
After descending the last flight of stairs, they arrived at the deepest depths.
   
It felt so much different from when they had been looking down from above. But that was not too surprising since 250 meters was larger than a domed stadium. This was the same as a sports field looking so much bigger from the stands than on TV.
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It felt so much different from when they had been looking down from above. But that was not too surprising since 250m was larger than a domed stadium. This was the same as a sports field looking so much bigger from the stands than on TV.
   
 
Yes, Hamazura Shiage now stood on the stage. He was no longer an outsider looking in.
 
Yes, Hamazura Shiage now stood on the stage. He was no longer an outsider looking in.
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His knees suddenly dropped to the ground. He could not keep his shoulders at the same height and his lost strength would not return.
 
His knees suddenly dropped to the ground. He could not keep his shoulders at the same height and his lost strength would not return.
   
“Wha—!?”
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“Wha-!?”
   
 
It was the ghost woman.
 
It was the ghost woman.
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Did this mean she even artificially reproduced those aspects of a ghost? He did not want to believe it because it would mean there was nothing he could do.
 
Did this mean she even artificially reproduced those aspects of a ghost? He did not want to believe it because it would mean there was nothing he could do.
   
“Hamazu—!?”
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“Hamazu-!?”
   
 
“You noticed? You must have sharper senses.”
 
“You noticed? You must have sharper senses.”
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Takitsubo gasped and spoke while holding onto him.
 
Takitsubo gasped and spoke while holding onto him.
   
“I get that the constant use of a massive amount of unseen energy would eventually create something unnatural. But if seeing you is deadly, how do you choose specific targets to—?”
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“I get that the constant use of a massive amount of unseen energy would eventually create something unnatural. But if seeing you is deadly, how do you choose specific targets to-?”
   
 
She trailed off.
 
She trailed off.
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She had seen something out of the corner of her eye, but not the artificial ghost this time. A unified set of colors could be seen peeking at them from a gap in the door to one of the freight train’s containers.
 
She had seen something out of the corner of her eye, but not the artificial ghost this time. A unified set of colors could be seen peeking at them from a gap in the door to one of the freight train’s containers.
   
''They were small children wearing gym clothes and some kind of device. There were more than just ten or twenty of them.
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''They were small children wearing gym clothes and some kind of device. There were more than just 10 or 20 of them.
   
 
''All of them were a part of the ghost experiment.
 
''All of them were a part of the ghost experiment.
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“But in this specific location, I believe you too will find you cannot wield your full power.”
 
“But in this specific location, I believe you too will find you cannot wield your full power.”
   
“What are you—gah!!!!????”
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“What are you- gah!!!!????”
   
 
He had given her plenty of warning, but she suddenly arched her back and then froze unnaturally in midair. An ominous straining sound continued on and on as her body grew distorted. She bent and stretched, almost like a face pressed against a wall of glass.
 
He had given her plenty of warning, but she suddenly arched her back and then froze unnaturally in midair. An ominous straining sound continued on and on as her body grew distorted. She bent and stretched, almost like a face pressed against a wall of glass.
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“A pinhole…camera?”
 
“A pinhole…camera?”
   
“High Voltage Cutting? I see, a strange theory, but she is still a form of unstable energy. And all energy will move from high to low—unstable to stable. This is enough to break down her form and burn in her image.”
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“High Voltage Cutting? I see, a strange theory, but she is still a form of unstable energy. And all energy will move from high to low – unstable to stable. This is enough to break down her form and burn in her image.”
   
 
The old man let go of the candy box.
 
The old man let go of the candy box.

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