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== Translator's Note: ==
 
== Translator's Note: ==
Caliber SS is an alternate end to the Caliber story found in Volume 8. It takes part after Part 3 and follows a "What if Klein didn't save Freyja" scenario. In order to fully enjoy the chapter, it is recommended that one finish reading the normal end first (the entire Caliber story line).
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The Caliber SS is an alternate end to the Caliber story found in Volume 8. It takes part after Part 3 and follows a "What if Klein didn't save Freyja" scenario. In order to fully enjoy the chapter, it is recommended that one finish reading the normal end first (the entire Caliber story line).
   
The first half of this chapter is almost entirely the same as the first half of Part 4 (with minor changes such as removing all references to Freyja) and was translated by [[User:BeginnerXP|BeginnerXP]]. It was rewritten for grammar, spelling, and other minor edits by Kryo. The story diverges about halfway through, in the middle of the battle with Þrym. To make it easier to navigate, I broke the chapter into sections, the third section being where the story path diverges.
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The first half of this chapter is almost entirely the same as the first half of Part 4 (with minor changes such as removing all references to Freyja) and was translated by [[User:BeginnerXP|BeginnerXP]]. The story diverges about halfway through, in the middle of the battle with Þrym. To make it easier to navigate, I broke the chapter into sections, the third section being where the story path diverges.
   
'''<u>Note:</u>''' Here SS means 少し失敗 (sukoshi shippai) which translates to Slight Slip-up. <!--Zero2001: I leave it to those in charge to remove or modify this as they wish. *Suggestion: 'Slight Setback' ?-->
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'''<u>Note:</u>''' Here SS means 少し失敗 (sukoshi shippai) which translates to Slight Failure. However since there are no synonyms for failure starting with the letter S, therefore the title has been left the same as it was in the original.<!--Zero2001: I leave it to those in charge to remove or modify this as they wish. *Suggestion: 'Slight Setback' ?-->
   
   
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=== Part 1 ===
 
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The katana user finished off the black Minotaur evil-god by stabbing it with his special skill, as if releasing the grudges he had kept up to this moment. Not paying any attention to the drop items on the spot the enemy avatar had burst apart, he turned around and yelled,
   
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"Oi Kiritard! What did ya do just now!?"<!--キリ公-->
The katana user finished off the black Minotaur Deviant God by stabbing it with the ferocity of multiple grudges being released all at once. Not paying any attention to the list of dropped items when it burst into a cloud of glittering polygons, he turned around and yelled, “Hey, Kirito! What did ya do just now?!”
 
   
That question obviously referred to my usage of one-handed sword skills while equipped with two swords. Explaining in detail would be very troublesome, so I obeyed my inner thoughts and answered with as troubled a face as I could manage.
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That question obviously referred to my usage of one-handed sword skills while equipped with two swords, and explaining in detail would be very troublesome, so I obeyed my inner thoughts and said while giving my most troubled face,
   
...Do I have to say it?
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"......Do I have to say it?"
   
“O’course! After seeing something like that!!” It seemed I had pressed Klein’s curiosity button, and figuring it was unavoidable, I answered briefly.
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"'Course! After seeing something like that!"
   
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It seemed I had pressed Klein's curiosity button, and since it was unavoidable, I answered briefly,
“It was a skill outside the system, Skill Connect.”
 
   
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"It was a skill outside the system, «Skill Connect»."
“Oooh-” Liz, Silica and Sinon whistled in unison. Suddenly, Asuna pressed her fingertips to her temples and growled.
 
   
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Oo―, was the sound which flowed out of Liz, Silica, and Sinon mouth; suddenly Asuna pressed her fingertips to her right temple and growled,
“Um...somehow, I got a strong feeling of Déjà vu…”
 
   
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"Um......somehow, I got a strong feeling of Déjà vu......"
“It’s just your imagination.” I shrugged my shoulders and clapped my hand on our healer’s back, whom despite her support duty in the back row, had sneaked in during the battle with the gold Minotaur to deliver the killing blow. “This is not the time for relaxed talk. Leafa, how much time do we have left?”
 
   
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“Ah, right.” After sheathing her long katana in its scabbard behind her waist, Leafa held up the medallion hanging from her neck. From a few steps away, I could see that the light within the jewel was almost completely list. “...At the current pace, we still have an hour or two.”
 
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"It's just your imagination."
   
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I shrugged my shoulders and clapped my hand on our healer-sama's back, whom despite her support duty in the back row, had sneaked in during the battle with the gold Minotaur to deliver the killing blow.
“I see. Yui, this dungeon has four floors, right?” I asked the little fairy sitting atop my head.
 
   
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"This is not the time for relaxed talk. Lyfa, how much time do we have left?"
“Yes, the third floor is around seventy percent the size of the second, and the fourth floor is essentially the boss room,” she responded clearly.
 
   
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"Ah, right."
“Thank you.” Stretching my right hand, my fingertips stroked my hair while I quickly considered the situation. At this moment, in Jotunheim far below us, the players accepting the Frost Giant Tribe’s quest and the hunting of the bestial Deviant Gods had gained momentum. The number of participants taking part would only increase. The remaining time would most likely be around an hour. The battle with the last boss - King Thrym himself - should take about thirty minutes, leaving us with thirty minutes to clear the third floor.
 
   
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After sheathing her long sword in its scabbard behind her waist, Lyfa held up the medallion hanging from her neck. From a few steps away, I could see that the light within the jewel was almost completely lost.
If there was a little more time, we could explain the situation the players on the field, asking for their assistance in stopping the ongoing quest, but at this moment we didn’t have enough time to return to the field and make an announcement. The other alternative was to message the fairy lords requesting reinforcements, but organizing a force in the capital city beyond the mountain range, moving it to the Alne plateau, and reaching Jotunheim from the dungeon stairs could take until sundown.
 
   
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"......At the current pace, we still have an hour or two."
In other words, with just seven people, we were in a hopeless situation. Or rather, factoring in the failure of Queen Uld’s side quest from the Cardinal System’s automatic quest generator function, Thrymheim castle would surface on Alfheim, triggering the large-scale campaign quest Ragnarok. The fault was obviously with the character who inherited its function from its creator.
 
   
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"I see. ――Yui, this dungeon structure has four floors right?"
“...In that case, I don’t care if it’s the king of the Deviant Gods or not, we’ll just smash him for good,” Lisbeth said with a slap on my back. The rest of the group murmured in agreement. Where did they get that recklessness from? With this thought in mind, I strongly nodded.
 
   
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I continued asking, so the little fairy sitting on my head the whole time responded clearly,
“Everyone’s HP and MP fully recovered? Then let’s breeze through the third floor!”
 
   
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"Yes, the third floor is around seventy percent of the second floor size, the forth floor should be mostly the boss room."
The combined voice echoed once more. Seven people then kicked the floor and started running, aiming for the boss room on the lowest floor, which was just visible through the ice.
 
   
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"Thank you."
Just as Yui said, the third floor was clearly smaller than the second. It was natural for the lower parts of an inverted pyramid, but it was still a rather narrow and complicated passage. For a normal clearing, we would be confused by the gimmicks of the paths, but we had, enshrined on my head, a Navigation Pixie which could give the latest model of an intelligent car’s navigation system a run for its money.
 
   
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Stretching my right hand, my fingertips stroked my hair while I quickly considered the situation.
Our trump card accessed the map data, and with her instructions we could run through the winding passage at full speed. Even the puzzles using levers, gears, or stepping switches were cleared without any time used to solve them. If this affair were observed from the outside, there would be no mistake in thinking we were trying to set a record for fastest clearing.
 
   
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At this moment, in the Jötunheimr field far below us, the players accepting the «Frost Giant Tribe» side's quest and the hunting of the beast type evil-gods had gained momentum. The number of quest participants would only increase and not decrease. The remaining time was estimated to be around an hour. The battle with the last boss ―― probably «King Þrym» himself ―― should take about thirty minutes, we wouldn't be able to move to the third and forth floor within thirty minutes.
We ran into sub-bosses twice, but we still reached the third floor in only eighteen minutes. What awaited us there was twice the size of the Cyclops and Minotaur from the previous floors. Both sides of its long lower body had ten pairs of centipede-like feet. It was clearly a Deviant God, but it didn’t have much physical resistance. So obviously it had attack power through the roof. Klein and my HP gauges dipped into the red multiple times. The battle, which made my stomach sore at the thought that either of dying would lead to a wipe, went on for nine minutes.
 
   
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During that time, Liz, Silica, Sinon (and Pina) tried their best to cut down the giant’s feet one by one, at which point I finished it off with Skill Connect. With our high spirits, we rushed into the fourth floor to beat King Thrym and Niflheim. Once we stepped into the passage leading to the boss room, we stopped, staring at the scene in front of our eyes.
 
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If there were a little more time, we could explain the situation to the players on the field, asking for their assistance in revoking the ongoing quest, but at this moment we didn't have enough time to go back to the ground. The other alternative was to message the fairy lord requesting reinforcements, but organizing a force in the capital city beyond the mountain range, moving it to the Aarun plateau, and reaching Jötunheimr from the dungeon stairs, by the time they did them the sun would have set.
   
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In other words, with just seven people, we were in a hopeless situation. ―― Or rather, factoring in the failure of «Queen Urðr»'side quest from the Cardinal's automatic quest generator function, Þrymheimr castle would surface on Alfheim, and trigger the start of a large-scale campaign quest «Ragnarök». The fault was obviously the character who inherited its function from its creator.
It was a cage made of elongated icicles on the wall’s edge.
 
   
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Anyway――
Behind the fence made of stalactites growing sharply from both the ground and ceiling, was a single figure. It was not a giant. As it was collapsed on the ground, it was hard to guess at an accurate size, but it looked to be about the same height as Asuna’s Undine avatar.
 
   
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"......In that case, I don't care if it's the king of the evil-gods or not, we will just «Smash» him for good!"
The skin was as white as the thick layer of powdery snow on the ground. The long, flowing hair was a deep golden brown. The volume of the chest covered by the clothing that could be seen from her sorry state could, although it would be best not to say this aloud, could easily overwhelm all of our girl members. Both her hands and feet were shackled in the rugged ice.
 
   
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Lisbeth said that with a slap on my back, the rest of them altogether went "Oo!" in agreement. Where did they get that recklessness from? While thinking that, I strongly nodded.
The unexpected scene caused us to halt, worried. Then, the captive girl’s shoulders made a sudden but subtle shake as she lifted her face, the blue chains ringing. Her pupils were also of the same tea-gold as her hair. Her face, if it was a player avatar, would surely be the result of overwhelmingly good luck when it was created, or, more likely, of a rather large sum of money; it was sublime with western European beauty, a rarity in this game.
 
   
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"――Alright, everyone's HP and MP have fully recovered right? Then let's clean up the third floor quickly!"
Blinking once, her long eyelashes moved down, then up, and she spoke in a fine voice.
 
   
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The combined voice echoed once more, seven people then kicked the floor, and started running, aiming for the boss' room on the lowest floor, which was visible through the ice.
“Please….. Help me….. Out of here….”
 
   
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Klein the katana user was sucked aimlessly toward the ice cage. I grabbed and pulled the bandana tail dangling from behind his head.
 
   
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Just as Yui said, the third floor was clearly narrower than the second floor. It was natural for the lower parts of an upside down pyramid, but this place was quite a narrow and also had a complicated passage. For a normal clearing, we would be confused by the gimmick of the paths, but we had, enshrined on my head, the Navigation Pixie-sama which could give the latest model of an intelligent car navigation system a run for its money.
“It’s a trap.”
 
   
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Our trump card accessed the map data, and with her instructions, we could run through the winding passage at full speed. Even the gimmick puzzles using levers, gears, or stepping switches were cleared without any time used to solve them. If this affair were to be observed from the outside, there would be no mistake for them to think that we were doing a time attack for the fastest clearing.
“Trap.”
 
   
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We ran into the sub-boss twice, but we still reached the boss room of the third floor in only eighteen minutes. What awaited us there had twice the size of the Cyclops and Minotaur from the previous floors, both sides of its long lower body had ten pairs of centipede-like feet, it was clearly the creepy evil giant, but it didn't have much physical resistance. Of course its attack power was through the roof, so the HP gauge belonging to Klein and me were in the red so many times after being targeted by it. This battle, which made my stomach sore later, when I thought that either of us dying would lead to a wipe, went on for nine minutes.
“That’s a trap.”
 
   
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Sinon and Liz chimed in immediately after me. Klein straightened his back and turned around, as he made a subtle expression while scratching his head.
 
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During that time; Liz, Silica, Sinon, and Pina tried their best to cut down the giant's feet one by one, I then finished it off with the «Skill Connect» which included multiple sword skills once it was unable to move. With our high spirits, we rushed into the fourth floor to beat King Þrym and his Niflheimr. Once we stepped into the passage leading to the boss room, we stopped, as in front of our eyes ―― a scene came into view.
   
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It was a cage made of elongated icicles on the wall's edge.
“O-Oh….it’s a trap…..A trap, right?” For the sake of the katana user on his deathbed, I asked in a small voice, “Yui?”
 
   
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Behind the fence caused by the stalactite growing sharply from both the ground and the ceiling, was a single figure. It was not of a giant's size. As it had collapsed on the ground, its accurate size was difficult to tell, but its body should be about the same height as the Undine Asuna's.
“It’s an NPC,” she promptly replied. “Just like Uld, there is a connection to the language engine module. But, there is one difference. This one has an HP gauge enabled.” Normally, the HP gauge of quest-giving NPCs would be disabled to prevent them from taking damage and dying. The exceptions where when the NPC was an escort quest objective, or the NPC was actually--
 
   
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The skin was as white as the powdery snow lying thick around. The long flowing hair was a deep brown gold. The volume of the chest covered by the clothing that could be seen from her sorry state, it would be best not to say this out loud, as it could easily overwhelm all of our girl members. Both her hands and feet were shackled in the rugged ice.
“A trap.”
 
   
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The unexpected scene caused us to halt and feel worried, then the captive girl's shoulders made a sudden but subtle shake, as she lifted her face, with the blue chains ringing.
“It’s a trap.”
 
   
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Her pupils were also of the same tea gold, like her hair. Her face, if it was a player avatar, would surely be because of overwhelming luck when it was created, or the account was bought with the large sum of money. However, her face was sublimed with the western European beauty, which was quite rare in this game.
“I think it’s a trap.”
 
   
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Asuna, Silica and Leafa commented at the same time. Klein’s eyebrows raised in an upside-down ‘V’, his eyes widened, and his lips pursed. I patted his shoulder.
 
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Blinking once, her long eyelashes moved down then up, the girl said in a fine voice,
   
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"Please...... Help me......out of here......"
“Of course, it could be possible that it isn’t a trap, but right now we don’t have time for trial-and-error. We need to reach Thrym’s place as early as possible, even if it is just a second sooner.”
 
   
“O….oh, hmm, well, that’s right, yeah…” Klein nodded slightly and moved his gaze from the ice cage. When we were just a few steps from the stairs, the voice came again from behind.
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The katana user was sucked aimlessly toward the ice cage, I grabbed and pulled the bandana tail which dangled from behind his head.
   
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"It's a trap."
“Please…...anybody……”
 
   
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"Trap."
To be honest, I also had the urge to help her. I didn’t think NPCs were merely the system’s automatically-generated moving objects, but dwellers living in this world. If this in a normal quest progression, helping that girl, accompanying her, and, as the story was reaching its end, hearing her laugh from behind, “Uhahahahahaha, you fools,” would still be plenty fun. However, we were not in the position to take that unnecessary risk now.
 
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"That's a trap."
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The last two were Sinon's and Liz's words.
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Klein straightened his back and turned around, as he made a subtle expression while scratching his head.
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"O-Oh......It's a trap. ......A trap, right?"
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For the katana user on his death bed's sake, I asked in a small voice, "Yui?". The pixie on my head promptly replied,
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"It's an NPC. Just like Urðr-san, there is connection to the language engine module. ――But, there is one difference. This person has the HP gauge enabled."
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Normally, the HP gauge of the quest giving NPCs would be disabled to prevent them from taking damage. The exceptions were, when the NPC was the escort quest's objective, or the NPC was actually――
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"A trap."
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"It's a trap."
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"I think it's a trap."
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Asuna, Silica, and Lyfa said at the same time.
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His eyebrows made a 八 shape, his eyes widened, and his mouth was pursed; I patted Klein's shoulder who was stiff in those complex expressions and quickly said,
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"Of course it could be possible that it isn't a trap, but now we don't have time for trial and error. We need to reach Þrym's place as early as possible, even if it is a second sooner."
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"O......Oo, hmm, well, that's right, yeah."
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Klein nodded slightly and moved his glance from the ice cage.
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When we ran until just a few steps before reaching the stairs, the voice came again from behind,
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"......Please...... anybody............"
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――To be honest, I also had the urge to help her, as I didn't think that NPCs were merely the system's automatically generated moving objects, but dwellers living in this world. If this was in a normal quest progression, helping that girl, accompanying her, and as the story progressed until the end, hearing her laugh from behind, "Uhahahaha, you fool―", would still be amusing. However, we were not in the situation to take that unnecessary risk now.
   
 
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