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"My lord, there is a time and a place for all things," Ravan gravely informed him. "You, my liege, being honest and frank, are a gentleman who cannot tell a lie or be sneaky."
 
"My lord, there is a time and a place for all things," Ravan gravely informed him. "You, my liege, being honest and frank, are a gentleman who cannot tell a lie or be sneaky."
   
"In other words, you're saying that I'm foolish and stupid. Yeah, that's right. I splendidly made Orba captain of the mercenaries without realising that he was Gil's subordinate."
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"In other words, you're saying that I'm a foolish and stupid man. Yeah, that's right. I splendidly made Orba captain of the mercenaries without realising that he was Gil's subordinate."
   
 
"I am filled with awe at your perspicacity."
 
"I am filled with awe at your perspicacity."
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At the word ‘wife’, Gil Mephius coughed violently. Unusually for him, he could not hide his consternation over Ax’s teasing.
 
At the word ‘wife’, Gil Mephius coughed violently. Unusually for him, he could not hide his consternation over Ax’s teasing.
   
The people filling the room however were naturally well-acquainted with their master’s personality and did not take it seriously. ''Our liege has started joking around again''.
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The people filling the room however were naturally well-acquainted with their master’s personality and did not take it seriously. ''The lord has started joking around again''.
   
 
They watched the exchange with warm, contented feelings, and only Bouwen Tedos looked stunned.
 
They watched the exchange with warm, contented feelings, and only Bouwen Tedos looked stunned.
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"I would like to borrow a few dozen of the beautiful dancing girls that Taúlia is so justly proud of."
 
"I would like to borrow a few dozen of the beautiful dancing girls that Taúlia is so justly proud of."
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=== Part 2 ===
 
=== Part 2 ===

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