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I just can’t understand women after all. Ralphus thought to himself.
 
I just can’t understand women after all. Ralphus thought to himself.
 
 
   
 
A faint whistling could be heard, riding on the wind.
 
A faint whistling could be heard, riding on the wind.
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Oblivious to Yuri’s contemplations, Rain continued singing his song in a broken bell sort of voice, while riding atop his finely groomed white stallion.
 
Oblivious to Yuri’s contemplations, Rain continued singing his song in a broken bell sort of voice, while riding atop his finely groomed white stallion.
   
He seemed to pay no heed to the fact that he was amidst shops in the very center of the merchants district of the capital city. He was completely ignoring the laughter, directed at him, of the people walking along the main road. He might even be famous in a different meaning of the word.
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He seemed to pay no heed to the fact that he was amidst shops in the very center of the merchants district of the capital city. He was completely ignoring the laughter, directed at him of the people walking along the main road. He might even be famous in a different meaning of the word.
   
 
Nevertheless, Yuri had no intention of getting involved with him, even for a fraction of a second.
 
Nevertheless, Yuri had no intention of getting involved with him, even for a fraction of a second.
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As she was thinking this, Rain rode past a tavern, turning suddenly down a side street.
 
As she was thinking this, Rain rode past a tavern, turning suddenly down a side street.
   
''Yet again you're planning on something like that…!''
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''Yet again your planning on something like that…!''
   
 
Closing the distance, Yuri hurriedly turned the corner after him.
 
Closing the distance, Yuri hurriedly turned the corner after him.
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“I, impossible… such speed…”
 
“I, impossible… such speed…”
   
“Of course, after all I am a genius.”
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“Of course, after all I am a genius”
   
 
Rain said, pushing back his bangs with one hand. He really got on her nerves, but now was not the time for retorts.
 
Rain said, pushing back his bangs with one hand. He really got on her nerves, but now was not the time for retorts.
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“H, how….?”
 
“H, how….?”
   
“How did I know? Well you know, I’m just sorta sensitive to people’s presence, so something like tailing could never work, and besides, your movement is nothing like an ordinary girl's.”
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“How did I know? Well you know, I’m just sorta sensitive to people’s presence, so something like tailing could never work, and besides, your movement is nothing like an ordinary girls.”
   
 
“Uuuu…”
 
“Uuuu…”
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“……Excuse me.”
 
“……Excuse me.”
   
“Right! You're in agreement then. Alright, then you’re treating till I drop!”
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“Right! Your in agreement then. Alright, then you’re treating till I drop!”
   
 
Yuri took in as much air as she could before she yelled with all her might,
 
Yuri took in as much air as she could before she yelled with all her might,
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“……Hah?”
 
“……Hah?”
   
“Like I said, house arrest. You know, the kind where I can’t leave my castle. So I guess it’s castle arrest, haha.”
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“Like I said, house arrest. You know, the kind were I can’t leave my castle. So I guess it’s castle arrest, haha.”
   
 
Rain told her, as though enjoying himself.
 
Rain told her, as though enjoying himself.
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It must have been a coincidence, but Chris neighed, as though laughing at her.
 
It must have been a coincidence, but Chris neighed, as though laughing at her.
 
 
   
 
Gradually, the scent of trees began mixing in with the chilling air.
 
Gradually, the scent of trees began mixing in with the chilling air.
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“B, but…”
 
“B, but…”
   
“Don’t ‘b, but’ me! Send the groups back into the castle this instant!”
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“Don’t ‘b, but’ me! Sent the groups back into the castle this instant!”
   
 
“Well, just a moment, General.”
 
“Well, just a moment, General.”

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