Editing Owari no Chronicle:Volume6 Chapter 20

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When that happened, Shiro would deal with them.
 
When that happened, Shiro would deal with them.
   
The dogs gathered here were the ones who had joined her and Shiro. She was their master and Shiro was their boss.
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The dogs gathered here were the ones who had joined her and Shiro. She was their master and Shiro was there boss.
   
 
As she looked at all of them, she wanted to give them all food, but she could not.
 
As she looked at all of them, she wanted to give them all food, but she could not.
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She could tell he was an enemy, but his general atmosphere prevented her from moving. He was perfectly relaxed, but she had no idea what he would do if she did anything.
 
She could tell he was an enemy, but his general atmosphere prevented her from moving. He was perfectly relaxed, but she had no idea what he would do if she did anything.
   
She had felt this same oppression when facing Tatsumi in training.
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She had felt this same oppression when face Tatsumi in training.
   
 
Shiro lowered down next to her but did not let down his guard.
 
Shiro lowered down next to her but did not let down his guard.

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