Editing Mimizuku to Yoru no Ou: Chapter 4

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It was the knife she always used to cut up the corpses.
 
It was the knife she always used to cut up the corpses.
   
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She felt like she had screamed, like something had shaken in her throat. However, she couldn't remember anything. She couldn't remember her voice, or even if the things she yelled were actual words.
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She felt like she had screamed, like something had shaken in her throat. However, she couldn't remember anything. She couldn't remember her voice, or even if what she yelled were actual words.
   
 
"I stabbed him. Yeah."
 
"I stabbed him. Yeah."
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Kuro did not halt his speech.
 
Kuro did not halt his speech.
   
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"It was far, very far away. If you crossed several mountains and went so far north that human skin would change color, you would find this tiny kingdom. They did not write, and they could not hunt. However, this country was never poor, because in a certain mountain in that country laid a dazzling mineral. The people mined that mineral, manufactured with it, and sold it, gaining much wealth in the process. The lifestyle of the king was as well marked by abundance. He was able to hire mercenaries, and thus increased his military power. Though the land was covered in deep snow during the winter, this only made the fleeting spring more beautiful."
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"It was far, very far away. If you crossed several mountains and went so far north that human skin would change color, you would find this tiny kingdom. They did not write, and they could not hunt. However, this country was never poor, because in a certain mountain in that country laid a dazzling mineral. The people mined that mineral, manufactured with it, and sold it, gaining much wealth in the process. The lifestyle of the king was as well marked by abundance. He was able to hire mercenaries, and thus increased his military power. Thought the land was covered in deep snow during the winter, this only made the fleeting spring more beautiful."
   
 
"Snow..."
 
"Snow..."

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