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However, it was not that simple.
 
However, it was not that simple.
   
Daughters were not always born, and there was no guarantee they would have the same brilliance. Even if she were talented, there was no guarantee she would grow as expected. Even after surpassing such difficulties, another person suited to being a Vanadis may appear.
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Daughters were not always born, and there was no guarantee they would have the same brilliance. Even if she were talented, there was no guarantee she would grow as expected. Even after surpassing such difficulties, another person suitable to being a Vanadis may appear.
   
 
Though many Vanadis tried to raise their daughters to become Vanadis, there was rarely any success. There were very few who realized their desires.
 
Though many Vanadis tried to raise their daughters to become Vanadis, there was rarely any success. There were very few who realized their desires.
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She was interested.
 
She was interested.
   
The Vanadis of Olmutz and the Vanadis of LeitMeritz had had a bad relationship over many generations.
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The Vanadis of Olmutz and the Vanadis of LeitMeritz had a bad relationship over many generations.
   
 
Though it was natural they be wary of each other, having territories near each other, they had clashed more than just once or twice. Ludmira's mother was also involved in frequent arguments.
 
Though it was natural they be wary of each other, having territories near each other, they had clashed more than just once or twice. Ludmira's mother was also involved in frequent arguments.
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“She's a condescending girl with a large attitude who has nothing to boast of but her lineage.”
 
“She's a condescending girl with a large attitude who has nothing to boast of but her lineage.”
   
Though Vanadis, they were 14 year old girls.
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Though a Vanadis, they were 14 year old girls.
   
 
Furthermore, Ludmira had been restless, and Ellen was confused, having just become a Vanadis. Perhaps this result was inevitable.
 
Furthermore, Ludmira had been restless, and Ellen was confused, having just become a Vanadis. Perhaps this result was inevitable.
   
Though they wanted to ignore each other, such a relationship was impossible due to their territories being near one another. Neither wanted to lose to the other, as well.
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Though they wanted to ignore each other, a relationship was impossible due to their territories being near one another. Neither wanted to lose to the other, as well.
   
 
One year became two, and Ellen had shown her merit on the battlefield and in how she governed LeitMeritz, so Ludmira had no choice but to acknowledge her to some extent. That is why she held an interest in Tigre.
 
One year became two, and Ellen had shown her merit on the battlefield and in how she governed LeitMeritz, so Ludmira had no choice but to acknowledge her to some extent. That is why she held an interest in Tigre.
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“... I will meet him.”
 
“... I will meet him.”
   
Ludmira responded calmly and stood from her chair.
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Ludmira responded calmly and stood from her hair.
   
   
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“That is most likely. To fight a Vanadis, it is natural to use another Vanadis.”
 
“That is most likely. To fight a Vanadis, it is natural to use another Vanadis.”
   
Ellen spoke and patted the Arifal's sheath as it leaned against the wall.
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Ellen spoke and patted the Arifal's sheathe as it leaned against the wall.
   
 
“But how did he know Viscount Augre was our ally? If not for the bandits...”
 
“But how did he know Viscount Augre was our ally? If not for the bandits...”
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Even if she successfully left her territory, she needed to leave her soldiers behind in the case of an emergency.
 
Even if she successfully left her territory, she needed to leave her soldiers behind in the case of an emergency.
   
In order for Thenardier to fight Ganelon without worrying about the third force forming beneath Tigre, he had to crush Tigre before Ellen regained her freedom of action.
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In order for Thenardier to fight Ganelon without worrying about the third force forming beneath Tigre, he had to crush it Tigre before Ellen regained her freedom of action.
   
 
“No, if it's her, she might attack once I move away...”
 
“No, if it's her, she might attack once I move away...”
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The two armies which mutually held the Black Dragon Flag clashed; their spears crossed and their shields collided.
 
The two armies which mutually held the Black Dragon Flag clashed; their spears crossed and their shields collided.
   
Some soldiers collapsed from the horses' unstoppable charge, while others knocked the cavalry to the ground. Those who had fallen were trampled on or cut down as the soldiers swarmed across the land.
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Some soldiers collapsed from the horses' unstoppable charge, while others knocked the cavalry to the ground. Those how had fallen were trampled on or cut down as the soldiers swarmed across the land.
   
 
The grass was wet, and the cold disappeared as blood dyed the earth. The heat rapidly escaped from the corpses as they fell, while others were quickly crushed as they tried to stand again.
 
The grass was wet, and the cold disappeared as blood dyed the earth. The heat rapidly escaped from the corpses as they fell, while others were quickly crushed as they tried to stand again.
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“Well, it should be fine to tell you. Don't tell others, though. The Vanadis are chosen by the {{furigana|Dragonic Tool|Viralt}}.”
 
“Well, it should be fine to tell you. Don't tell others, though. The Vanadis are chosen by the {{furigana|Dragonic Tool|Viralt}}.”
   
Tigre was unable to react immediately, having been told such an important thing so easily. Ellen picked up Arifal and placed it over her shoulder. She looked at the sheath of the longsword lovingly, though with sarcasm mixed into her gaze.
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Tigre was unable to react immediately, having been told such an important thing so easily. Ellen picked up Arifal and placed it over her shoulder. She looked at the sheathe of the longsword lovingly, though with sarcasm mixed into her gaze.
   
 
“A little over two years ago, this fellow chose me to be his Vanadis.”
 
“A little over two years ago, this fellow chose me to be his Vanadis.”
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''--- The weapon chooses its wielder. Though I have seen these in myths and fairy tales, I did not think they actually existed. Weapons are weapons, after all.''
 
''--- The weapon chooses its wielder. Though I have seen these in myths and fairy tales, I did not think they actually existed. Weapons are weapons, after all.''
   
However, while Tigre insisted this loudly in his mind, Tigre's memories objected. The longsword in Ellen's hand occasionally playfully hit him with wind.
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However, while Tigre insisted this loudly in his mind, Tigre's memories objected. The longsword in Ellen's hand occasionally playfully hit him with wind at times.
   
 
Also, there was the black bow to his side.
 
Also, there was the black bow to his side.
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''--- Maybe that's why Ellen told me.''
 
''--- Maybe that's why Ellen told me.''
   
He felt as though he had stepped into an unknown world in a different dimension. Tigre felt a moment of dismay and wondered if he should even hear this story.
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He felt as though he had stepped into an unknown world in a different dimension. Tigre felt a moment of dismay wondered if he should even hear this story.
   
 
However, Tigre shook it away immediately.
 
However, Tigre shook it away immediately.
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“Um, how does the {{furigana|Dragonic Tool|Viralt}} chooses the Vanadis?”
 
“Um, how does the {{furigana|Dragonic Tool|Viralt}} chooses the Vanadis?”
   
“It suddenly appears before the selected person. If the person takes it in her hand, words flow into her head. It's a bit difficult to explain, but it told me I had become a Vanadis and to head to the Imperial Palace. So I was a Vanadis the day I appeared before the Palace.”
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“It suddenly appears before the selected person. If the person takes it in her hand, words flow into her head. It's a bit difficult to explain, but it told me I had become a Vanadis and to head the Imperial Palace. When I was a Vanadis the day I appeared before the Palace.”
   
 
''--- Words...''
 
''--- Words...''

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