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And then, Water trumps Fire. That is the law derived from Chinese cosmology.
 
And then, Water trumps Fire. That is the law derived from Chinese cosmology.
   
But think about it. Certainly Water makes Fire disappear. In that case, did the brilliant, primitive fire disappear with just a cup of water?
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But think about it. Certainly Water makes Fire disappear. In that case, did the brilliant, primitive fire disappeared with just a cup of water?
   
 
Water is also stronger than Fire. But that is not something absolute. It was just something relatively favorable.
 
Water is also stronger than Fire. But that is not something absolute. It was just something relatively favorable.
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Regarding the energy it's able to release, there's nothing that equals <<Fire>>. No matter how much predominance <<Water>> has -
 
Regarding the energy it's able to release, there's nothing that equals <<Fire>>. No matter how much predominance <<Water>> has -
   
"How can I lose? To the likes of you!"
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"How can I loose? To the likes of you!"
   
 
"Meeh, kuuh!"
 
"Meeh, kuuh!"
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Chris drew to himself the water that was cut off trying to reconstruct the whip once more but that spanned a few seconds.
 
Chris drew to himself the water that was cut off trying to reconstruct the whip once more but that spanned a few seconds.
   
In front of Enraiha at full power, Mizuchi was literally doing nothing more but pouring water on hot stone.
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In front of Enraiha at full power, Mizuchi was literally doing nothing more but pouring water of hot stone.
   
 
Torn piece by piece, Mizuchi wasn't even allowed to keep the whip shape.
 
Torn piece by piece, Mizuchi wasn't even allowed to keep the whip shape.
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This time she made a verbal tsukomi.
 
This time she made a verbal tsukomi.
   
Maybe because she was composed enough, while overlooking Chris reconstructing his water whip without interfering, Ayano glared at Kazuma with an angry look.
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Maybe because she was composed enough, while overlooking Chris reconstructing his water whip without interfeering, Ayano glared at kazuma with an angry look.
   
 
"There's no need to worry, except you I wouldn't do this to anyone!"
 
"There's no need to worry, except you I wouldn't do this to anyone!"
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"You son of a bitch.......a wind barrier, in that moment you........" squeezed Chris with eyes covered in hatred.
 
"You son of a bitch.......a wind barrier, in that moment you........" squeezed Chris with eyes covered in hatred.
   
The Enjutsushi Ayano had no way of escaping from that explosion. Then, there is only one answer.
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The Enjutsushi Ayano had no way of escaping from that explosion. Then, there is only on e answer.
   
 
"You have no time to look away, lady-killer."
 
"You have no time to look away, lady-killer."
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"You came out when that man was about to die. So, as a penalty for violating your oath, at least cut one of your arms!"
 
"You came out when that man was about to die. So, as a penalty for violating your oath, at least cut one of your arms!"
   
"..........Don't get excited, youngster," replied Gaia in a crushed to death voice.
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"..........Don't get exited, youngster," replied Gaia in a crushed to death voice.
   
 
"Besides, you were to one to excessively meddle in those two's fight."
 
"Besides, you were to one to excessively meddle in those two's fight."
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"As far as it goes, let me name myself. I am Gaia. I have no family name. And then -"
 
"As far as it goes, let me name myself. I am Gaia. I have no family name. And then -"
   
Gaia pushed out the axe he was holding. What was dwelling in the blade with a dull shine was the power of the earth, strong enough to make one shiver.
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Gaia pushed out the ax he was holding. What was dwelling in the blade with a dull shine was the power of the earth, strong enough to make one shiver.
   
 
From the development until now it was easy to guess its true colors.
 
From the development until now it was easy to guess its true colors.
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"Huh, it's fast."
 
"Huh, it's fast."
   
Maneuvering Nozuchi, Gaia continued handling those high speed thrusts. But, by nature, an axe is not a weapon aimed at defending.
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Maneuvering Nozuchi, Gaia continued handling those high speed thrusts. But, by mature, an ax is not a weapon aimed at defending.
   
 
Although avoiding those aiming for his vitals, the attacks he couldn't handle gave his body countless wounds.
 
Although avoiding those aiming for his vitals, the attacks he couldn't handle gave his body countless wounds.
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"Huaa!"
 
"Huaa!"
   
With just one blow, he knocked down the countless thrusts, and even blew away the boy's body.
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With just one blow, he knocked down the countless thrusts, and eve blown off the boy's body.
   
 
"Guh......hah........"
 
"Guh......hah........"
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"Meeeeaaah........"
 
"Meeeeaaah........"
   
Gaia was driven into a one sided defence. He couldn't even grasp a clue on how to attack.
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Gaia was driven into a one sided defense. He couldn't even grasp a clue on how to attack.
   
If he were to give up on his defence and brandish his axe, in that moment the wind blades would make a great number of holes in his body.
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If he were to give up on his defense and brandish his ax, in that moment the wind blades would make a great number of holes in his body.
   
No - even now, he couldn't defend against his wind blades. The fact that Kazuma's attack was hitting Nozuchi and didn't struck Gaia was because Kazuma was naturally aiming at the axe.
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No - even now, he couldn't defend against his wind blades. The fact that Kazuma's attack was hitting Nozuchi and didn't struck Gaia was because Kazuma was naturally aiming at the ax.
   
 
He was being played with - although he understood that, Gaia couldn't do anything.
 
He was being played with - although he understood that, Gaia couldn't do anything.
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At the disgrace of being looked down upon by ''the likes'' of a Fujutsushi, Gaia grounded his teeth. And finally made his decision.
 
At the disgrace of being looked down upon by ''the likes'' of a Fujutsushi, Gaia grounded his teeth. And finally made his decision.
   
Believing in his own tenaciousness more than in the fact that he was pressed down until now, he cast away his defence and brandished Nozuchi.
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Believing in his own tenaciousness more than in the fact that he was pressed down until now, he cast away his defense and brandished Nozuchi.
   
 
He was slightly slow. Or else, together with Gaia's resolution and good fortune, Kazuma stopped the monotonous attack and took another approach.
 
He was slightly slow. Or else, together with Gaia's resolution and good fortune, Kazuma stopped the monotonous attack and took another approach.
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"Slow."
 
"Slow."
   
Shortly informing Gaia, who was trying to prepare his axe in confusion, Kazuma suddenly rotated the spear.
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Shortly informing Gaia, who was trying to prepare his ax in confusion, Kazuma suddenly rotated the spear.
   
 
The end of the black handle - the sharp part, knocked the short man off his feet.
 
The end of the black handle - the sharp part, knocked the short man off his feet.
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"I managed somehow with a such a weightless attack, huh?"
 
"I managed somehow with a such a weightless attack, huh?"
   
What dwelt in his voice and attitude was plain mockery. The naked blade glistening in his hand, was already sharply sung down aiming at the nape of his neck.
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What dwelt in his voice and attitude was plain mockery. The naked blade glistening in his hand, was already sharply sung down aiming at the rape of his neck.
   
 
Rather than capitalizing on its length the true worth of that long-handled spear was the phantasmagoria consecutive attack resembling a circular motion.
 
Rather than capitalizing on its length the true worth of that long-handled spear was the phantasmagoria consecutive attack resembling a circular motion.
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"Well, leaving that aside, we should leave this place already. It will become noisy."
 
"Well, leaving that aside, we should leave this place already. It will become noisy."
   
- Because she was forced into silence by Kazuma's next words.
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- Because she was forced to be silent by Kazuma's next words.
   
 
"........Yeah."
 
"........Yeah."
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On the surface nothing changed. But the people found there clearly grasped the change.
 
On the surface nothing changed. But the people found there clearly grasped the change.
 
 
The spear that until now was nothing but a lump of metal recovered its overwhelming power.
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The spear that until now was nothing but a lump of metal recovered her overwhelming power.
   
 
That power of the spear itself wrapped the boy clasping it and formed one ''field''.
 
That power of the spear itself wrapped the boy clasping it and formed one ''field''.

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