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In the park a dry wind was blowing through, Kazuma was alone, looking up at the sky.
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In the park a dry wind was blowing through, Kazuma was solitary looking at the sky.
   
There wasn't anyone around.
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There was no one around.
   
 
As the <<Seeds>> given power by Pandemonium were loitering around, it produced a change in Shinjuku.
 
As the <<Seeds>> given power by Pandemonium were loitering around, it produced a change in Shinjuku.
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No matter how the situation turns out, pondering about it doesn't amount to anything.
 
No matter how the situation turns out, pondering about it doesn't amount to anything.
   
The result was that the homeless around Shinjuku were eradicated. But the parks became less accommodating for normal people than before.
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The result was that the homeless around Shinjuku were eradicated. But the parks became less accommodating for normal people that before.
   
It's only natural. The <<Seeds>> were only fighting at night but there aren't any people who tread on the blood-stained pavement on their own accord.
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It's only natural. The <<Seeds>> were only fighting at night but there aren't any people who thread on the blood-stained pavement on their own accord.
   
 
"Well then........."
 
"Well then........."

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