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"This harmless little thing I bought that for third year of middle school. This not so harmless little thing was given to me as a present from the boss, who said 'It looks good on you, so I bought it! Hm!'"
 
"This harmless little thing I bought that for third year of middle school. This not so harmless little thing was given to me as a present from the boss, who said 'It looks good on you, so I bought it! Hm!'"
   
Naturally, he probably already had no choice but to choose the harmless Nakasan model.
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With that, already, he naturally and probably had no choice but to choose the harmless Nakasan model.
   
"...Yana-ssan, didn't you think from the start 'He'd probably pick the dangerous one the boss gave me'...?"
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"...Yana-ssan, didn't you think from the start 'I probably have to pick the dangerous one the boss gave me'...?"
   
"Perhaps. Surprisingly, you'd said it looked like you could wear it well."
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"Perhaps. Surprisingly, Banri said it looked like I wore it well."
   
"You're making too much of it. Ah, I'm glad you gave it to me here this evening. If you'd given it to me tomorrow, on site, I'd've had no choice but to wear it."
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"You're making too much of it. Ah, I'm glad you gave it to me here this evening. If you'd given it to me tomorrow, on site, you'd have no choice but to wear it."
   
"Wouldn't it have been more entertaining that way?"
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"Would it have been more entertaining that way?"
 
As for Mitsuo, he laughed happily at the two swimsuits he'd brought and placed in front of Banri.
 
   
 
He decided to borrow the aforementioned harmless one on the right. Plain deep blue, it was nothing more than simple and sober. Even trying to take it in hand and look at it closely, it was nothing special, truly innocuous. Shall we just call it a young man's school swimsuit? Because of its utter lack of design, it didn't feel particularly old-fashioned even though a few years had passed. It didn't give off that embarrassing feeling like it had been chosen for a middle-schooler. If he were go through and borrow this one, he felt it would be received warmly.
 
He decided to borrow the aforementioned harmless one on the right. Plain deep blue, it was nothing more than simple and sober. Even trying to take it in hand and look at it closely, it was nothing special, truly innocuous. Shall we just call it a young man's school swimsuit? Because of its utter lack of design, it didn't feel particularly old-fashioned even though a few years had passed. It didn't give off that embarrassing feeling like it had been chosen for a middle-schooler. If he were go through and borrow this one, he felt it would be received warmly.

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