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That, although Vois’s subordinate’s way of speaking was a little odd, but the fact that Kiefer was beautiful was true.
 
That, although Vois’s subordinate’s way of speaking was a little odd, but the fact that Kiefer was beautiful was true.
   
So Ryner crossed his arms, staring at Kiefer, saying firmly: “Yes, really pretty.”
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So Ryner crossed his arms, staring at Kiefer, saying firmly: “Eh, really pretty.”
   
 
Kiefer smiled happily, then turned back, saying: “But, Ferris is more beautiful.”
 
Kiefer smiled happily, then turned back, saying: “But, Ferris is more beautiful.”
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“Aren’t I in front of you?”
 
“Aren’t I in front of you?”
   
“Ehh? You’re Ryner?”
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“Eh eh? You’re Ryner?”
   
 
“If I’m not Ryner who am I?”
 
“If I’m not Ryner who am I?”
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“Who is the defeatist?” Ryner yelled angrily.
 
“Who is the defeatist?” Ryner yelled angrily.
   
But after hearing Ryner’s angry yell, Ferris looked to him, revealing a relieved expression, “Ah, it’s indeed Ryner.”
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But after hearing Ryner’s angry yell, Ferris looked to him, revealing a relieved expression, “Ah ah, it’s indeed Ryner.”
   
“Hey, I say you are… Well, never mind never mind. Anyway I didn’t think I would fit this image.” Ryner said, then looked at the mirror again.
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“Hey, I say you are… ma, never mind never mind. Anyway I didn’t think I would fit this image.” Ryner said, then looked at the mirror again.
   
 
The mirror reflected Ryner wearing formal attire and two beauties wearing dresses.
 
The mirror reflected Ryner wearing formal attire and two beauties wearing dresses.
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At this moment, Relca said: “Then, it’s about time. Go and greet the Geihlficlant king—Gulafed Abuleld-sama. Ah yes, Ryner, the biography about King Abuleld…”
 
At this moment, Relca said: “Then, it’s about time. Go and greet the Geihlficlant king—Gulafed Abuleld-sama. Ah yes, Ryner, the biography about King Abuleld…”
   
Ryner nodded and said: “Yeah, I remembered. I only need to remember the information on the documents you gave me yesterday?”
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Ryner nodded and said: “Ah ah I remembered. I only need to remember the information on the documents you gave me yesterday?”
   
 
It should be mentioned that on the report that was given to him yesterday, something like this was written—
 
It should be mentioned that on the report that was given to him yesterday, something like this was written—
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“Really?”
 
“Really?”
   
“Yeah. Don’t be so worried. Even I am nervous. I have to stand in front of a king of an admirable country, and negotiate with him? Furthermore I have my important companions with me. If I made a mistake and caused the plan to fail, everyone would be in trouble right? So that that will not happen, I will work hard slightly.” Ryner said.
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“Ah ah. Don’t be so worried. Even I am nervous. I have to stand in front of a king of an admirable country, and negotiate with him? Furthermore I have my important companions with me. If I made a mistake and caused the plan to fail, everyone would be in trouble right? So that that will not happen, I will work hard slightly.” Ryner said.
   
 
At the same time, someone knocked on the door. A familiar male voice said, “You can meet with His Majesty, please prepare quickly.”
 
At the same time, someone knocked on the door. A familiar male voice said, “You can meet with His Majesty, please prepare quickly.”
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Looking at these three people, Ryner smiled and that gave him a slight headache, trying to greet that, “That… Yo~ It’s been a long time since we last met.”
 
Looking at these three people, Ryner smiled and that gave him a slight headache, trying to greet that, “That… Yo~ It’s been a long time since we last met.”
   
Peria smiled too, saying: “Yeah, it’s been a long time since we met. I’ve missed you, Ryner. You’ve grown a lot.”
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Peria smiled too, saying: “Ah ah, it’s been a long time since we met. I’ve missed you, Ryner. You’ve grown a lot.”
   
 
Followed by Zohra who said: “I don’t even want to see you and that was it.”
 
Followed by Zohra who said: “I don’t even want to see you and that was it.”
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At this moment Ferris suddenly said: “Hey Ryner, what is wrong with that woman?”
 
At this moment Ferris suddenly said: “Hey Ryner, what is wrong with that woman?”
   
But Ryner stopped Ferris from speaking, “Ah, don’t move Ferris. That is a challenge. If we are insulted, it will become very troublesome.”
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But Ryner stopped Ferris from speaking, “Ah ah, don’t move Ferris. That is a challenge. If we are insulted, it will become very troublesome.”
   
 
“But.”
 
“But.”
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Pia smiled as she asked: “Aha, do you want me to treat them more warmly?”
 
Pia smiled as she asked: “Aha, do you want me to treat them more warmly?”
   
“Yes.” Ryner nodded his head honestly.
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“Eh.” Ryner nodded his head honestly.
   
 
But Pia laughed even more, “But, I am not able to be more warm~ Because they are your companions, I haven’t killed them yet? Originally, if I saw the dogs of the monster I would kill them immediately.” Saying that, she released her killing intent. Her killing intent made their bodies tense uncontrollably. Perhaps it was because this killing intent was so strong, that people here couldn’t even feel it.
 
But Pia laughed even more, “But, I am not able to be more warm~ Because they are your companions, I haven’t killed them yet? Originally, if I saw the dogs of the monster I would kill them immediately.” Saying that, she released her killing intent. Her killing intent made their bodies tense uncontrollably. Perhaps it was because this killing intent was so strong, that people here couldn’t even feel it.
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Ferris nodded, “Vois said your… your eyes were cursed by the “'''Goddess'''” so they became strange.”
 
Ferris nodded, “Vois said your… your eyes were cursed by the “'''Goddess'''” so they became strange.”
   
Ah, so that was it. Ryner thought. So she revealed that unsettled expression.
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Ah ah, so that was it. Ryner thought. So she revealed that unsettled expression.
   
 
“Vois that bastard, I knew that he had that information…” Ryner gritted his teeth as he spoke, then turned to Kiefer, asking: “What about Kiefer? Have you heard anything about “'''Goddess'''”?”
 
“Vois that bastard, I knew that he had that information…” Ryner gritted his teeth as he spoke, then turned to Kiefer, asking: “What about Kiefer? Have you heard anything about “'''Goddess'''”?”
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She replied: “There are a few sayings in the legends.”
 
She replied: “There are a few sayings in the legends.”
   
“Yes.”
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“Eh.”
 
 
“But no matter what the endings are, the “'''Goddesses'''” always swallow the world.”
 
“But no matter what the endings are, the “'''Goddesses'''” always swallow the world.”
   
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But talking about which, this wasn’t the time to be worrying about Kiefer’s change in expression.
 
But talking about which, this wasn’t the time to be worrying about Kiefer’s change in expression.
   
Ryner moved his eyes away from Kiefer, then said: “Well, anyway the information that we know is only a small bit, right?”
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Ryner moved his eyes away from Kiefer, then said: “Ma, anyway the information that we know is only a small bit, right?”
   
 
Ferris looked over to him, then said: “Eh? Are you talking to me?”
 
Ferris looked over to him, then said: “Eh? Are you talking to me?”
   
Anyway he would ignore this problem, Ryner continued: “Then, if what Vois said is true, then Vois may be preparing to trick that “'''Goddess'''”? Well, but because that person is a liar we can’t trust him completely… But, ma~, I’ll trust him a little this time. Because although that person will not tell us the truth, he will similarly not reveal his personality to the “'''Goddess'''”.”
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Anyway he would ignore this problem, Ryner continued: “Then, if what Vois said is true, then Vois may be preparing to trick that “'''Goddess'''”? Ma, but because that person is a liar we can’t trust him completely… But, ma~, I’ll trust him a little this time. Because although that person will not tell us the truth, he will similarly not reveal his personality to the “'''Goddess'''”.”
   
 
Towards this, this time it was Kiefer who looked to him, “Wait, Ryner. That, this, are you talking to us?”
 
Towards this, this time it was Kiefer who looked to him, “Wait, Ryner. That, this, are you talking to us?”
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Ryner looked at Vois, saying: “You clearly appeared because they left, and you dare to pretend to be stupid.”
 
Ryner looked at Vois, saying: “You clearly appeared because they left, and you dare to pretend to be stupid.”
   
Vois laughed, “Well, although that is true. But no matter what they want to kill me. But it’s a heartache that we didn’t manage to persuade them. Originally if it were possible I wished for them to help us proceed with the plan.”
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Vois laughed, “Ma, although that is true. But no matter what they want to kill me. But it’s a heartache that we didn’t manage to persuade them. Originally if it were possible I wished for them to help us proceed with the plan.”
   
 
Ryner thought of the contents of the card that Pia gave them, “…The plan to attack and gain Geihlficlant while it’s fighting?”
 
Ryner thought of the contents of the card that Pia gave them, “…The plan to attack and gain Geihlficlant while it’s fighting?”
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Then he handed over a second piece of paper, “This is the proposal to effectively snatch a few of Geihlficlant’s territories and fight against Roland.”
 
Then he handed over a second piece of paper, “This is the proposal to effectively snatch a few of Geihlficlant’s territories and fight against Roland.”
   
Lastly was a third piece of paper, “This is the proposal that under the situation that Azure Princess gains Geihlficlant’s power and assistance, accepting the help of the Ertolia Republic—Well, no matter what situation we can’t become exhausted, so I prepared a few proposals at the same time. It’s just that I did not tell Ryner the plans that would affect your mood the most. So actually I didn’t lie.”
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Lastly was a third piece of paper, “This is the proposal that under the situation that Azure Princess gains Geihlficlant’s power and assistance, accepting the help of the Ertolia Republic—Ma, no matter what situation we can’t become exhausted, so I prepared a few proposals at the same time. It’s just that I did not tell Ryner the plans that would affect your mood the most. So actually I didn’t lie.”
   
 
Ryner was so angry that he felt that even scolding Vois as a **** bastard was even troublesome, but when he thought that this person was like this all the time, so he didn’t know why but he felt very tired, giving up on specially complaining, only looking at Vois with a tired face, saying: “… If you always tell lies, you won’t get friends?”
 
Ryner was so angry that he felt that even scolding Vois as a **** bastard was even troublesome, but when he thought that this person was like this all the time, so he didn’t know why but he felt very tired, giving up on specially complaining, only looking at Vois with a tired face, saying: “… If you always tell lies, you won’t get friends?”
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Vois laughed as he replied: “I didn’t need friends even from the beginning?”
 
Vois laughed as he replied: “I didn’t need friends even from the beginning?”
   
“Well, you speak so straight-forwardly, I can’t even say anything… but, if it’s like this, I won’t help you again?”
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“Ma, you speak so straight-forwardly, I can’t even say anything… but, if it’s like this, I won’t help you again?”
   
 
“Why?”
 
“Why?”
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“You, although you have taken the Nelpha of people as hostages, making us listen to your orders, but actually that can be easily retaliated, you know?” Saying that, Ryner raised his right hand, making a fist as if he were about to punch him.
 
“You, although you have taken the Nelpha of people as hostages, making us listen to your orders, but actually that can be easily retaliated, you know?” Saying that, Ryner raised his right hand, making a fist as if he were about to punch him.
   
Well~ although the other party was a child so threatening him like this would be strange, but there was no other plan, Vois looked at Ryner’s fist, replying: “Ara, has that been found out?”
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Ma~ although the other party was a child so threatening him like this would be strange, but there was no other plan, Vois looked at Ryner’s fist, replying: “Ara, has that been found out?”
   
 
“No, actually I discovered it in the beginning… I was only thinking about when to do it.”
 
“No, actually I discovered it in the beginning… I was only thinking about when to do it.”
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“Ahaha, it’s really a good opportunity. As long as you punch me until I’m half dead and make me a hostage, you would be able to control the Anti-Roland Coalition.”
 
“Ahaha, it’s really a good opportunity. As long as you punch me until I’m half dead and make me a hostage, you would be able to control the Anti-Roland Coalition.”
   
“Yes, no matter what you are of high prestige. So you can be a good hostage.” Ryner looked at Relca behind Vois who looked frantic.
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“Eh, no matter what you are of high prestige. So you can be a good hostage.” Ryner looked at Relca behind Vois who looked frantic.
   
 
Although she seemed to want to rush over when Ryner clenched his face, but she was easily stopped by Ferris grabbing her neck, stopping her.
 
Although she seemed to want to rush over when Ryner clenched his face, but she was easily stopped by Ferris grabbing her neck, stopping her.
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“You will definitely do the same things as me. So that we will have the power to attack a country, then accepting a country’s help. No matter what, if you don’t take away someone’s power, the organization will be unable to grow.”
 
“You will definitely do the same things as me. So that we will have the power to attack a country, then accepting a country’s help. No matter what, if you don’t take away someone’s power, the organization will be unable to grow.”
   
Ryner nodded, “Well, although that’s true. But why must the Anti-Roland Coalition grow? I don’t understand this point. Originally I didn’t leave the country so to fight with Roland. It’s the same with Gastark. I want to use my methods…”
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Ryner nodded, “Ma, although that’s true. But why must the Anti-Roland Coalition grow? I don’t understand this point. Originally I didn’t leave the country so to fight with Roland. It’s the same with Gastark. I want to use my methods…”
   
 
Looking for a way to save Sion—although he wanted to say this, but he gave up. Anyway Vois never thought about saving Sion, even if he said it it was useless.
 
Looking for a way to save Sion—although he wanted to say this, but he gave up. Anyway Vois never thought about saving Sion, even if he said it it was useless.
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So he changed his words, “I would use other methods… new methods, to try and change the world.”
 
So he changed his words, “I would use other methods… new methods, to try and change the world.”
   
Vois continued to smile: “Yes. That was what you wrote on that report, right?”
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Vois continued to smile: “Eh eh. That was what you wrote on that report, right?”
   
 
Ryner looked at Vois’s smiling face that made people feel unhappy, asking: “…Why do you know about that?”
 
Ryner looked at Vois’s smiling face that made people feel unhappy, asking: “…Why do you know about that?”
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“So this time you are searching for a weapon with a divine power to stop Sion Astal—are you planning that? Is this the plan that you talked of to change the world?”
 
“So this time you are searching for a weapon with a divine power to stop Sion Astal—are you planning that? Is this the plan that you talked of to change the world?”
   
Ryner nodded, “…Well, although I don’t think it would succeed so easily.”
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Ryner nodded, “…Ma, although I don’t think it would succeed so easily.”
   
 
Vois replied simply: “It wouldn’t succeed.”
 
Vois replied simply: “It wouldn’t succeed.”
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“Is that so?”
 
“Is that so?”
   
“Yes.”
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“Eh.”
   
 
“But, this isn’t something you can decide.”
 
“But, this isn’t something you can decide.”
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Ryner muttered: “The Heroes’ Relics… are unable to match up to it?”
 
Ryner muttered: “The Heroes’ Relics… are unable to match up to it?”
   
“Yes. There’s practically no way to compare it.”
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“Eh. There’s practically no way to compare it.”
   
 
“What exactly is that?”
 
“What exactly is that?”
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Towards her obvious confirmation, but him always sinking into depression it was the stage where he was so tired of it that he wanted to cry.
 
Towards her obvious confirmation, but him always sinking into depression it was the stage where he was so tired of it that he wanted to cry.
   
Vois said: “Yes. That means in Ferris’ world, Ryner isn’t any monster. Then next we’ll ask Kiefer.” He turned his eyes to the other side.
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Vois said: “Eh eh. That means in Ferris’ world, Ryner isn’t any monster. Then next we’ll ask Kiefer.” He turned his eyes to the other side.
   
 
Ryner still was unable to look at the other side.
 
Ryner still was unable to look at the other side.
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“What is that?”
 
“What is that?”
   
“Haha. Well, anyway let’s go first. If you feel like you can’t do it you can escape.” Vois said and then walked forward again.
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“Haha. Ma, anyway let’s go first. If you feel like you can’t do it you can escape.” Vois said and then walked forward again.
   
 
He walked with a seemingly happy expression.
 
He walked with a seemingly happy expression.

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