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Seven adjusted his glasses using a finger.
 
Seven adjusted his glasses using a finger.
   
"Both of us will prepare the required arrangements. All of you should be careful to make no mistakes. Proceed without fail."
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"Both of us will prepare the required arrangements. All of you should make no mistakes. Proceed without fail."
   
 
"Take care... the people of ''Orbis Librarius Norma''."
 
"Take care... the people of ''Orbis Librarius Norma''."
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The sun sank further in the west. As the twilight sky burned an even deeper shade of red, the shadows gradually grew denser and longer as they were etched on the ground.
 
The sun sank further in the west. As the twilight sky burned an even deeper shade of red, the shadows gradually grew denser and longer as they were etched on the ground.
   
As if putting on a shadow, Eight waved her long mantle and turned her back from the alley where the figures had vanished. As she folded her arms beneath chest, she brought her cheek to rest on her mantle's fur trim.
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As if putting on the shadow, Eight waved her long mantle and turned her back from the alley where several figure people had vanished. As her folded her arms lifted up her chest, she brought her cheek near the flashy fur.
   
"I was worried about what had to be done there for a moment, but looks like everything will work out in the end. It's fortunate that we have a personal connection to Orbis Librarius Norma."
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"I thought about what to be done for a moment, but looks like everything works out in the end. It's fortunate that we have personal connection to Orbis Librarius Norma."
   
 
"Fortunate, huh."
 
"Fortunate, huh."
   
As if pouring cold water over Eight's good mood, Seven simply dropped a sigh.
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As if pouring cold water to Eight's good mood, Seven simply dropped a sigh.
   
His voice was quiet, but Eight could hear how nervous he was. She furrowed the eyebrows that had been so carefully groomed.
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His voice was small, but Eight could hear his nervousness. She strongly churned up the eyebrows that had been carefully groomed.
   
 
"What's wrong? I know that you want to say it was all thanks to that man. It's good that we listened to his story."
 
"What's wrong? I know that you want to say it was all thanks to that man. It's good that we listened to his story."
   
"I wonder. I have no faith in that man. Once a traitor, always a traitor. You need to pay attention, too."
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"I wonder. I have no faith for that man. Once a traitor will always be a traitor. You need to pay attention, too."
   
 
"Is that so? Thanks for the warning."
 
"Is that so? Thanks for the warning."
   
Seven's scolding clearly didn't amuse her at all, Eight waved her hand over her shoulder. Her high heels, supporting her slender legs could be heard striking the pavements, long after she had left her field of view.
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Because Seven's scolding didn’t seem that amusing at all, Eight waved her hand over her shoulder. As the high heels that supported her slender legs hit the stone pavements, her thighs, freely exposed from the dress' slit, left the place.
   
 
"Hmph, what a detestable man."
 
"Hmph, what a detestable man."
   
After she was sure that she was out of earshot, Eight spat out those words. As if trampling the words as they fell to her feet, her feet began to move faster.
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After the distance was far enough, Eight spitted out those words. As if trampling those words as it fell to her feet, her heels made loud noises.
   
Similarly, while gazing at the retreating figure of his extravagant associate as she headed toward the Mages' Guild, Seven muttered to himself.
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Similarly, while gazing at the retreating figure of his extravagant associate as she headed toward the Mage's Guild, Seven slightly opened his mouth.
   
 
"...What a loud-mouthed woman."
 
"...What a loud-mouthed woman."
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The sun sank into the western sky.
 
The sun sank into the western sky.
   
The color of the sky that looked burning ran after its master and rushed to the west. As the city of Ishana gradually began to insinuate the presence of the night, Seven also began to walk towards the Mages' Guild.
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The color of the sky that looked burning also ran after its master and rushed to the west. As the city of Ishana gradually began to insinuate the presence of the night, Seven also began to walk to the Mage's Guild.
   
 
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