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As Nine and the teachers at the academy had said, the students should keep practicing every day and prepare themselves so they wouldn't get outdone by the Mage's Guild's magicians when the crucial time comes... or some kind of important duty like that.
 
As Nine and the teachers at the academy had said, the students should keep practicing every day and prepare themselves so they wouldn't get outdone by the Mage's Guild's magicians when the crucial time comes... or some kind of important duty like that.
   
(Well, it's expected. I'm only a burden to Onee-chan now. I have to study hard so I can stop being a burden to her as soon as possible.)
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(Well, it's expected. I'm only a burden to Onee-chan now. I have to study hard so I can quickly stop being a burden one day.)
   
What she was telling herself had also become a routine for the past few days. After all, she wasn't fully satisfied with just saying it. Her real motive was that if there was something she could do, then she wanted to do it as soon as she could.
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What she was telling herself had also become a routine for the past few days. After all, she wasn't fully satisfied with just saying it. Her real motive was that if there was something she could do, then she wanted to do it as soon as possible.
   
"For now, I guess I've got a while to relax and tidy the house before Onee-chan returns."
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"For now, I guess it's been while for me to take it easy and clean the house until Onee-chan returns."
   
 
"Right?" said Celica to Nirvana. She responded by moving her chin and staring at Celica.
 
"Right?" said Celica to Nirvana. She responded by moving her chin and staring at Celica.
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Looking at her expression, Celica laughed a little.
 
Looking at her expression, Celica laughed a little.
   
The streets in Ishana were cobbled stone pavements. When she walked home, she would normally take the main street heading from the academy towards the port. Then, after a little while she would turn down a side street, taking a little detour past a quiet park.
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The streets in Ishana were practically stone pavements. When she was going home, she would use the main street heading from the academy to the port. Then after leaving the street halfway and taking a turn, she would take a little detour by walking beside a quiet park.
   
Since she had to do the shopping today, instead she stayed on the main street. Celica was lost in thought while waiting to cross at a junction. Then, it happened.
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Since she had to do shopping today, she headed toward the main street. Celica thought about it while trying to go past a junction. Then, it happened.
   
 
"Celica A. Mercury. I wonder if I can have a bit of your time."
 
"Celica A. Mercury. I wonder if I can have a bit of your time."
   
She recognised the refreshing voice of the man which called to her from behind.
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A familiar refreshing voice of a man could be heard from behind.
   
Celica turned to look for him. What she saw was a pair, a man and a woman. The man looked like some kind of a noble due to his graceful manner, and the woman of slender body wore a dress that was wide open at the chest. There were large triangular hats atop their heads.
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Celica stopped her feet and turned her body around. What awaited was a pair of man and woman. A man that looked like some kind of a noble when judged from his graceful manner, and a woman with slender body who wore a dress that was wide open on the chest area. There were large triangular hats on top of their heads.
   
 
"Ah, Seven-san, Eight-san. Good day."
 
"Ah, Seven-san, Eight-san. Good day."
   
She immediately recalled Nine's dangerous mood when she met them in August. But Celica greeted them with a smile.
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She immediately recalled Nine's dangerous mood when she met them on August. But Celica greeted them with a smile.
   
Nine would not be amused if she were here.
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Nine wouldn't make an amused face if she were here.
   
Eight stared in wonder, as if puzzled by something. Her long, curled eyelashes batted quickly.
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Eight stared in wonder like she was being puzzled. Her long eyelashes that had lovely curls went up and down frantically.
   
"It's surprising how pleasant you are. Are you really Nine's sister?"
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"It's surprising that you're a pretty likeable. Are you really Nine's sister?"
   
"Yes, of course... What do you mean by that?"
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"Yes, of course... Hmm? What do you mean by that?"
   
As she pondered on the meaning of the question, Celica reflexively looked down at her own body. It was the first thing that came to mind if when searching for the reason why her relation to her sister was in question.
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As she suddenly thought about it, Celica reflexively looked down on her own body. It was the first that came to mind if she was searching for the reason why her blood relations with her sister were being questioned. Certainly, if she was her younger sister, then she would have a louder voice or so as she thought.
   
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Just as she was thinking about it, a noise could be heard. Celica took notice and raised her face.
"Could it be that she's surprised that Nine's sister's breasts are smaller than hers...?"
 
   
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Still standing with both hands on her hips with lips making a smile, Eight's eyes twitched.
Just as she was thinking about it, a noise broke her from her musing. Celica looked up.
 
   
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"...But it seems like you have the similar tendency to upset me."
Still standing with both hands on her hips, flashing a smile, Eight's eyes twitched.
 
 
"...But it seems like you do have a similar tendency to upset me."
 
   
 
It was a taboo to talk about Eight's proportion.
 
It was a taboo to talk about Eight's proportion.
   
Celica instinctively put her hands over her mouth.
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Celica instinctively put her hands on her mouth.
   
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With a considerably amazed tone of voice, Seven interrupted with a cough.
Interrupting with a cough, Seven spoke in a calm tone of voice.
 
   
"...Would it be all right to begin our talk?"
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"...Will it be all right to begin our talk?"
   
Behind the thin metal framed glasses, his calm ice blue eyes stared at Celica and Eight who were facing each other. As his manner was like a teacher from the academy, Celica retracted her chin, straightened her back, and brushed it off with a laugh.
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Beyond the thin metal framed glasses, his calm ice blue eyes stared at Celica and Eight who were facing each other. As his manner was like a teacher from the academy, Celica retracted her chin, straightened her back, and brushed it off with a laugh.
   
 
"Ah, y-yes. Go on."
 
"Ah, y-yes. Go on."
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After she urged him, Celica let out an 'ah' as she suddenly realized.
 
After she urged him, Celica let out an 'ah' as she suddenly realized.
   
"But Onee-chan's not here this time though...?"
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"But Onee-chan's not here today though...?"
   
"It's alright if she's not here. Our business only concerns you."
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"It's alright if she's not here. We only have a business with you."
   
Having regained her composure, Eight teasingly winked at Celica while entangling a wisp of hair that had spilled from under her hat onto her shoulder.
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Completely pulled herself together, Eight teasingly winked at her while entangling a wisp of hair that had spilled from the hat to her shoulder.
   
It was Seven who took the initiative to raise the main issue. Putting a real serious face, he adjusted his glasses with his index finger.
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It was Seven who took after that and asked the main issue. Putting a real serious face, he adjusted his glasses with his index finger.
   
 
"I will ask bluntly. Cooperate with our research."
 
"I will ask bluntly. Cooperate with our research."
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"Research..."
 
"Research..."
   
Muttering, Celica stole a glance at Nirvana.
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Muttering, Celica took a glance at Nirvana.
   
Nirvana was standing behind Celica.
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Nirvana was standing by behind Celica.
   
She remembered what Nine had said the day she met Nirvana. Celica spoke in a more quiet voice.
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She remembered what Nine had said during the day she met Nirvana.
   
 
"That's what Onee-chan has been opposing, right? ...She said I'll lose my life if I cooperate."
 
"That's what Onee-chan has been opposing, right? ...She said I'll lose my life if I cooperate."
   
But she wondered if such dangerous research was really being performed in a place like Ishana. Moreover, by the hands of Nine's fellow Sages.
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But she wondered if such dangerous research was really performed in a place like Ishana. Moreover, by the hands of Nine's fellow Ten Sages.
   
Seven looked baffled and vigorously shook his head.
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Noticing the surrounding as Celica dropped her voice, Seven put a baffled face and greatly shook his head.
   
"Perish the thought that you will die. Nine has had quite the misunderstanding. Our research only requires a bit of magical power and the unique healing ability you have. Generally, an unusual disposition of magical power, like yours, is needed."
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"Perish the thought that you will die. Nine has quite a misunderstanding. Our research only requires a bit of magical power and the unique healing ability you have. Generally, an unusual disposition of magical power is needed."
   
 
"Is... that so? Then..."
 
"Is... that so? Then..."
   
"Perhaps Nine so strongly doesn't want you to be involved in this research that she felt she must make an exaggerated lie. She really is a difficult woman."
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"Perhaps Nine doesn't want you to be involved with this research so much that she made an exaggerated lie. She really is a difficult woman."
   
"Good grief", said Seven, placing one pale finger on his brow.
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"Good grief", said Seven as he put his white finger on his brow.
   
To brush the comment aside, Eight leaned forward.
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To brush it aside, Eight leaned her body forward.
   
"What we're making is a powerful weapon to defeat the Black Beast that we know is going to revive one day. If we can engineer it, then surely... no, we definitely can win against it. We can fight without the need for things like Armagus."
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"What we're making is a powerful weapon to defeat the Black Beast that will revive one day. If it exists, then surely... no, we definitely can win against it. We can fight without things like Armagus."
   
Her thick lips, which were painted in bright red lipstick, delivered a passionate speech so fast that it was dizzying. Her large eyes burned with passion. It was unthinkable that she was the same as the lighthearted person who had raised an eye over talk about bust sizes before.
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Her thick lips, which were painted in bright red lipstick, delivered a passionate speech so fast to point it was dizzying. Her large eyes were burning with passion. It was unthinkable that she was the same as the lighthearted person who had raised an eye over talk about proportion before.
   
The same passion dwelled even in Seven's calm gaze as it rested on her.
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The same passion dwelled even in Seven's calm glance that was looking at her.
   
 
"Understood? If our project is realized, we won't have to recruit a large number of people to create Armagus weapons for the war. Hence, your cooperation is necessary."
 
"Understood? If our project is realized, we won't have to recruit a large number of people to create Armagus weapons for the war. Hence, your cooperation is necessary."

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