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Although Celica wore a bitter smile, she waved her hand to say it was okay.
 
Although Celica wore a bitter smile, she waved her hand to say it was okay.
   
"Don't take it to heart. It was my fault to begin with."
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"Don't take it to your heart. It was my fault to begin with."
   
 
"No, please don't be mistaken~. I wasn't angry because you stood up, or because Jubei-san's feet hit the table. That was just an accident. Rather, I'm worried that the two of you may have hurt yourself~."
 
"No, please don't be mistaken~. I wasn't angry because you stood up, or because Jubei-san's feet hit the table. That was just an accident. Rather, I'm worried that the two of you may have hurt yourself~."
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While pinning down her hood so it wouldn't get blown by the strong wind, Trinity gracefully smiled and went on her way after exchanging farewells.
 
While pinning down her hood so it wouldn't get blown by the strong wind, Trinity gracefully smiled and went on her way after exchanging farewells.
   
Standing on tiptoe, Celica waved her hand to her older sister's close friend. After the fairy-tale like figure faded from sight, Celica turned to Nine.
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Standing on tiptoe, Celica waved her hand to her older sister's close friend. After the figure that resembled an inhabitant of a fairy-tale gone from sight, Celica turned to Nine.
   
 
"Then let's go, Onee-chan. Ah, do you have to go back to the guild?"
 
"Then let's go, Onee-chan. Ah, do you have to go back to the guild?"
   
"No, I'll return home. ...But Celica, can I have a moment?"
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"No, I'll return home. ...But Celica, can I have your time for a moment?"
   
With a peaceful smile, Nine asked Celica while walking as if urging her to return home.
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Replying with a peaceful smile, Nine asked Celica while walking as if urging her to return home.
   
After catching up to her, Celica looked to her sister. It was rare for Nine to speak like that.
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After immediately standing next to her, Celica looked onto her sister. It was rare for Nine to speak like that.
   
"Okay. But what is it? Is something wrong?"
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"Okay. But what is it? Something's wrong?"
   
The footsteps of both Celica's leather shoes and Nine's high heels beat the same rhythm as they hit the stone pavement.
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The footsteps of both Celica's leather shoes and Nine's high heels had the same timing as they hit the stone pavement.
   
 
Even without the fast pace, Nine's glossy hair drew a beautiful and gentle waves from the petty wind.
 
Even without the fast pace, Nine's glossy hair drew a beautiful and gentle waves from the petty wind.
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"I'll tell you more later. Anyway, we should get back home... Come to my workshop."
 
"I'll tell you more later. Anyway, we should get back home... Come to my workshop."
   
The informed words made Celica unintentionally stumble before stopping. She couldn't quite breathe out the air she had involuntarily swallowed.
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The informed words made Celica unintentionally stumbled before stopping instantly. She couldn't quite breathe out the air she had involuntarily swallowed.
   
Nine's workshop. A place where none was permitted to tread with the exception of Nine herself.
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Nine's workshop. A place where none would be permitted to tread their feet into with the exception of Nine herself.
   
 
===Part 2===
 
===Part 2===
   
Nine's workshop was located in the basement of their home.
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Nine's workshop was located at the basement of their home.
   
 
The room was previously used by Celica and Nine's father as his laboratory. But about two years ago, Nine remodeled it into her personal workshop. It was done immediately after the simple funeral for her missing father was over.
 
The room was previously used by Celica and Nine's father as his laboratory. But about two years ago, Nine remodeled it into her personal workshop. It was done immediately after the simple funeral for her missing father was over.
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Its entrance was installed at a hardly visited corner at the house where they lived every day.
 
Its entrance was installed at a hardly visited corner at the house where they lived every day.
   
Their father had prohibited the children from entering the laboratory. Nine also didn't normally let any visitors enter the basement.
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Their father had prohibited the children from entering the laboratory. The older sister also didn't let anyone except herself to enter the basement.
   
Since before their father had left, Celica had never opened the door. Passing through it, Celica followed Nine's lead to a solid staircase descending into the basement.
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From the time of their father, and even when the user changed to her sister, Celica had never opened the door. Passing through it, Celica followed Nine's guidance to a solid staircase leading to the basement.
   
The staircase was surprisingly broad and went deeper than she had thought. There were magical lights furnished at regular intervals on the wall. The white lights burnt orange in the middle, illuminating their destination. Celica more or less could no longer comprehend that this place was under her own house.
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The staircase was surprisingly broad and went deeper than she had thought. There were magical lights furnished in equal interval on the wall. The while lights that had orange color in the middle part illuminated their destination. Celica more or less could no longer comprehend that this place was under her own house.
   
Nine's high heels made loud steps each time she stepped down. With each step, tension piled up inside Celica.
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Nine high heels made loud noises each time she stepped below. With each of the noise, tension piled up inside Celica.
   
Generally, a magician wouldn't show their own workshop to others, even if the other party was their family or lover. Furthermore, her sister's workshop contained research that shouldn't be spoken of.
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Generally, a magician wouldn't show their own workshop to others, even if the other party was their families or lover. Furthermore, her sister's workshop had researches that shouldn't be spoken of even for a bit.
   
It must be something significant since Nine was personally bringing Celica to her sanctum.
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It must be something significant since Nine was personally bringing Celica to such place.
   
While being conflicted over whether to be hopeful or uneasy, Celica finally arrived at the end of the stairs.
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While being conflicted whether to be hopeful or uneasy, Celica finally arrived at the end of the stairs.
   
 
Another door awaited there.
 
Another door awaited there.
   
Not only did it have countless magic circles floating on its surface, it was also furnished with an electric panel on the nearby wall and what appeared to be a tiny surveillance camera on the ceiling. There might even be more devices that Celica hadn't noticed yet.
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Not only it had countless magic circles emerged on its surface, it was also furnished with electric panel on the nearby wall and also something like a super small surveillance camera on the ceiling. Perhaps there might be other devices that Celica hadn't noticed yet.
   
A secure entrance to her workshop was very fitting for Nine.
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A tough entrance of a workshop befitting Nine.
   
"I've said this before, but inside it's quite messy. Be careful not to step on something weird."
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"I've said this before, but the inside is quite messy. Be careful not to step on something weird."
   
 
Looking over her shoulder as she spoke, Nine held her hand out to the door.
 
Looking over her shoulder as she spoke, Nine held her hand out to the door.
   
She spoke several spells without pause. Each time, various size of magic circle came apart before vanishing.
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She spoke several spells without pause. Each time, various size of magic circle came apart before it vanished.
   
Fiddling with the electric panel, she chanted another spell. Then finally, the workshop's entrance opened with a slight noise.
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Fiddling with the last electric panel, she chanted another spell. Then finally, the workshop's entrance opened with a slight noise.
   
 
"Ex... Excuse me."
 
"Ex... Excuse me."
   
Discreetly muttering, Celica went inside, following after Nine.
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Discreetly muttering, Celica went inside as she followed after Nine.
   
Then immediately, she stopped in the entrance.
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Then immediately, she stopped her feet at the entrance.
   
The room inside was filled with lights similar to those on the staircase. All four walls were stone brick; the floor and ceiling had been solidified with stone.
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The room inside was filled with lights similar like those at the staircase. It was surrounded by stacking stone bricks in all directions; the floor and ceiling had been solidified with stone.
   
There were large tables placed on both sides of the entrance. Various tools and equipment were crammed onto the tables. They ranged from things Celica recognized to some that she couldn't tell the purpose of. Further inside, there were two bookcases, which reached up to the ceiling like pillars, and also a writing desk and chair that didn't seem to be anything special.
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There were large tables placed in both sides of the entrance. Various tools and equipment were crammed up on the tables. They ranged from things Celica recognized to some that she couldn't tell their purpose of. More in the inside, there were two bookcases, which reached up to the ceiling like pillars, and also a set of writing desk and chair that didn't seem sticking out.
   
The so called wall in the room was entirely covered in the countless memos stuck to it. Nine had a strong habit in scribbling. They were messily written on those rectangular pieces of paper. If it weren't Celica or Trinity, the scribbles might look undecipherable.
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The so called wall in the room was entirely covered with countless memo sticking on it. Nine had a strong habit in doing scribble. They were messily written on those rectangular piece of papers. If it weren't Celica or Trinity, the scribbles might look undecipherable.
   
 
"This is... Onee-chan's..."
 
"This is... Onee-chan's..."
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When Celica looked inside the room, Nine had already gone inside the room unnoticed before turning around with arms folded.
 
When Celica looked inside the room, Nine had already gone inside the room unnoticed before turning around with arms folded.
   
"This way. And don't touch anything on the desk. They'll be hard to find if you rearrange anything."
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"This way. And don't touch anything on the desk. They'd be hard to find if the spot's changed."
   
 
"Ah, okay."
 
"Ah, okay."
   
Although she was still puzzled, Celica quickly made her way between the desks and bookcases before jogging toward Nine.
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Although she was still puzzled, Celica quickly made her way through between the desk and bookcases before jogging toward Nine.
   
There was another room in the back. Rather than feeling messy, the room had another kind of atmosphere in it. Its wall was obscured by large machinery and complicated devices. It wasn't a disordered room.
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There was another room in the back. Instead of feeling messy, the room had another kind of atmosphere in it. Its wall was buried with large machineries and complicated devices. It wasn't a disordered room.
   
In a corner of the room, stood a large doll.
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In a corner of the room, a large doll stood.
   
 
"Wha..."
 
"Wha..."

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