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“Don’t say such things that will spoil our appetite.”
 
“Don’t say such things that will spoil our appetite.”
   
I carelessly continued what Menma had said. With a “uh?”, Anjo looked at me surprisedly. And I quickly evaded her eyes in panic.
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I carelessly continued what Menma had said. With a “uh?”, Anjo looked at me surprisedly. I panickingly evaded her eyes
   
“All in all, this couldn’t be counted as a barbecue.”
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“All in all, this couldn’t e counted as a BBQ.”
   
 
“Should I make this into a teppanyaki<ref>http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Teppanyaki</ref>?”
 
“Should I make this into a teppanyaki<ref>http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Teppanyaki</ref>?”
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“Eh…What, so it was Yukiatsu!!”
 
“Eh…What, so it was Yukiatsu!!”
   
The tense atmosphere softened at an instant. Tsurumi seemed to have closed her eyes slightly.
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The tense atmosphere softened at an instant. Tsurumi seemed to have closed her heyes slightly.
   
“I brought some steak and also a few varieties of vegetables. There are also spice and olive oil…”
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“I brought some steak and also a few varities of vegetables. There are also spice and olive oil…”
   
 
“Oh yeah! You’re surely Yukiatsu! You’re completely different from those useless women!”
 
“Oh yeah! You’re surely Yukiatsu! You’re completely different from those useless women!”
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But Hisakawa caught his words that were drifting away.
 
But Hisakawa caught his words that were drifting away.
   
''If you’re talking about Menma, I saw her just a while ago.''
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If you’re talking about Menma, I saw her just a while ago.
   
 
“What?”
 
“What?”
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“Waah! So there’s another Menma…let’s go have a look, Jintan!!”
 
“Waah! So there’s another Menma…let’s go have a look, Jintan!!”
   
Menma had already dashed away. “Ah…” at the moment of my hesitation, Hisakawa raced behind her frantically.
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Menma had already dashed away. “Ah…” at the moment of my hestation, Hisakawa raced behind her frantically.
   
 
“Wuaghh! Menma, wait for me! I’ll give you some German sausages!”
 
“Wuaghh! Menma, wait for me! I’ll give you some German sausages!”
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What was his smile supposed to mean?
 
What was his smile supposed to mean?
   
''Matsuyuki…did you…did you really see Menma…?'' <!-- not spoken-->
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Matsuyuki…did you…did you really see Menma…? <!-- not spoken-->
   
 
“Hey. Jintan! Let’s quickly find her!”
 
“Hey. Jintan! Let’s quickly find her!”

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