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Chapter 22:
 
Chapter 22:
 
you used:
 
you used:
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'' "I didn't do it!"
 
 
"I didn't do it!"
 
   
 
Pompf...
 
Pompf...
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"Even if the whole world blames Naofumi-sama, I am different... No matter how many times it takes, I will refute them all." ''
 
"Even if the whole world blames Naofumi-sama, I am different... No matter how many times it takes, I will refute them all." ''
 
 
   
 
While the original version had some more lines and it goes rather like this:
 
While the original version had some more lines and it goes rather like this:
 
 
   
 
"I didn't do it!"
 
"I didn't do it!"
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"...Eh?!"
 
"...Eh?!"
   
"...Or could it be that you cannot trust anyone but a slave who can never disobey nor betray you? In that case please put a new curse on me. Should we go to this place where we first met? "
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"...Or could it be that you cannot trust anyone but a slave who can never disobey nor betray you? In that case please put a new curse on me. Shall we go to this place where we first met? "
   
 
"Y-you're lying!... This is another trick to deceive me!"
 
"Y-you're lying!... This is another trick to deceive me!"
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So if you are fine with it I would like to make the changes, especially since it is one of the most important scenes in Tate no Yushaa, I think it would be good to respect the original web novel as much as possible.
 
So if you are fine with it I would like to make the changes, especially since it is one of the most important scenes in Tate no Yushaa, I think it would be good to respect the original web novel as much as possible.
   
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[[User:Ushoran|Ushoran]] ([[User talk:Ushoran|talk]]) 20:58, 9 December 2014 (CST)
 
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[[User:Ushoran|Ushoran]] ([[User talk:Ushoran|talk]]) 20:57, 9 December 2014 (CST)

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