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==Limited Time Offer==
 
==Limited Time Offer==
   
With this and that, we returned to the village and began the days of improving our levels until the Waves came.
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With this and that, we returned to the village and began the days of improving our levels until the waves came.
   
 
Within that time, I went on an expedition with the high-leveled Raphtalia and the other slaves.
 
Within that time, I went on an expedition with the high-leveled Raphtalia and the other slaves.
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Ah, for the Atlas issue, I have slaves deployed near the house and have made a perfect defense, so she can’t come.
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Ah, for the Atla issue, I have slaves deployed near the house and have made a perfect defense, so she can’t come.
   
 
Well, Fohl is locking her in unsparingly, so it should be fine.
 
Well, Fohl is locking her in unsparingly, so it should be fine.
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“Ra-Raphtalia-san. E-everyone of the Raph species! Onii-sama, I just want to go where Naofumi-sama is! Please move aside.” (Atlas)
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“Ra-Raphtalia-san. E-everyone of the Raph species! Onii-sama, I just want to go where Naofumi-sama is! Please move aside.” (Atla)
   
 
“You cannot.” (Raphtalia)
 
“You cannot.” (Raphtalia)
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“You can’t.” (Fohl)
 
“You can’t.” (Fohl)
   
“““Rafu~!””” (Raphs)
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“””Rafu~!””” (Raphs)
   
   
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Their feel isn’t bad.
 
Their feel isn’t bad.
   
Apparently I made this when I was crazy, but… unexpectedly, I did a good job with them.
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Apparently I made this when I was crazy, but…unexpectedly, I did a good job with them.
   
   
 
Hm? There are some shed hairs.
 
Hm? There are some shed hairs.
   
…What will happen if I insert them into the shield?
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….What will happen if I insert them into the shield?
   
 
I insert some as a test.
 
I insert some as a test.
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You have unlocked the requirements for the Battle Raph Shield!
 
You have unlocked the requirements for the Battle Raph Shield!
   
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….etc
…etc
 
   
   
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Raph Shield 0/20 C
 
Raph Shield 0/20 C
   
Ability Sealed… Equipment Bonus, Raph Species Growth Correction (Small), Raph Species Attack Designation 1, (Limited Time Offer) Raphtalia’s Ability Correction (Small)
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Ability Sealed….Equipment Bonus, Raph Species Growth Correction (Small), Raph Species Attack Designation 1, (Limited Time Offer) Raphtalia’s Ability Correction (Small)
   
 
Proficiency 0
 
Proficiency 0
   
   
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…..err.
…err.
 
   
 
I don’t know which I should comment about.
 
I don’t know which I should comment about.
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“Rafu~” (Raph)
 
“Rafu~” (Raph)
   
“Naofumi-sama! It’s almost time for…” (Raphtalia)
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“Naofumi-sama! It’s almost time for….” (Raphtalia)
   
   
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I unconsciously reached out with my hand, reluctant to part.
 
I unconsciously reached out with my hand, reluctant to part.
   
That sensation when I was stroking it… even though it was fine.
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That sensation when I was stroking it…. even though it was fine.
   
 
I thought it would have made a perfect body pillow.
 
I thought it would have made a perfect body pillow.
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Also, a variety of other instructions appeared.
 
Also, a variety of other instructions appeared.
   
Furthermore, there’s even a strange skill like ‘C’mon Raphs’… the things this shield has...
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Furthermore, there’s even a strange skill like ‘C’mon Raphs’…. the things this shield has...
   
 
When used, I can summon the Raphs by portal.
 
When used, I can summon the Raphs by portal.
   
…Somehow, Raphtalia makes a complicated face whenever I use it, so I’m worried about whether I should seal its use.
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….Somehow, Raphtalia makes a complicated face whenever I use it, so I’m worried about whether I should seal its use.
   
 
Incidentally, the Raphs that turned wild extended their influence and now they’ve created an ecosystem in my territory, but that’s another story.
 
Incidentally, the Raphs that turned wild extended their influence and now they’ve created an ecosystem in my territory, but that’s another story.
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The next day.
 
The next day.
   
   
“Now then, Naofumi-sama. Please scold Atlas-chan, Firo, and Kiel-kun and punish each of them.” (Raphtalia)
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“Now then, Naofumi-sama. Please scold Atla-chan, Firo, and Kiel-kun and punish each of them.” (Raphtalia)
   
   
Atlas, Firo and Kiel were kept in the village plaza and I was told to scold them by Raphtalia.
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Atla, Firo and Kiel were kept in the village plaza and I was told to scold them by Raphtalia.
   
 
In reality, I was the one who went crazy and they were just taking my side, so I think the fault should be mine.
 
In reality, I was the one who went crazy and they were just taking my side, so I think the fault should be mine.
   
I feel like I’m in no position to assign punishments…
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I feel like I’m in no position to assign punishments…….
   
 
Or rather, I should be the one receiving a punishment instead.
 
Or rather, I should be the one receiving a punishment instead.
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It seems I came to harass the village and town occasionally and caused some destruction.
 
It seems I came to harass the village and town occasionally and caused some destruction.
   
Apparently it was covered for by using the profits from the Revival Festival though.
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Apparently it was covered for by using the profits from the Reconstruction Festival though.
   
   
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That her drinking ability has increased is comforting, but it’s my fault that it became such an outrageous situation, and I do my own self-reflection.
 
That her drinking ability has increased is comforting, but it’s my fault that it became such an outrageous situation, and I do my own self-reflection.
   
But if I am sternly cautioned by Raphtalia now… then those three won’t get the message.
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If I am sternly cautioned by Raphtalia now ….but then those three won’t get the message.
   
   
“Atlas.” (Naofumi)
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“Atla.” (Naofumi)
   
 
“What is it, Naofumi-sama?” (Atla)
 
“What is it, Naofumi-sama?” (Atla)
   
“…Why did you join me?” (Naofumi)
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“….Why did you join me?” (Naofumi)
   
   
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“Because that person was still Naofumi-sama, and I will always be by Naofumi-sama’s side.” (Atlas)
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“Because that person was still Naofumi-sama, and I will always be by Naofumi-sama’s side.” (Atla)
   
 
“Firo too~” (Firo)
 
“Firo too~” (Firo)
   
   
Firo spoke after Atlas did.
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Firo spoke after Atla did.
   
   
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“Eh~ that’s wrong~” (Firo)
 
“Eh~ that’s wrong~” (Firo)
   
“That’s right.” (Atlas)
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“That’s right.” (Atla)
   
 
“Yeah! Nii-chan was nice!” (Kiel)
 
“Yeah! Nii-chan was nice!” (Kiel)
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I was an arrogant villain! I wasn’t nice!
 
I was an arrogant villain! I wasn’t nice!
   
Or so I could respond, but… it seems like I might step on a land mine, so I’ll stay silent.
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Or so I could respond, but….it seems like I might step on a land mine, so I’ll stay silent.
   
   
“Then…” (Naofumi)
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“Then….” (Naofumi)
   
   
 
For a punishment, I must assign something the person will hate so that they’ll reflect.
 
For a punishment, I must assign something the person will hate so that they’ll reflect.
   
In Atlas case, she might conversely be happy with whatever I order her to do.
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In Atla’s case, she might conversely be happy with whatever I order her to do.
   
 
Alright.
 
Alright.
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“…What?” (Fohl)
 
“…What?” (Fohl)
   
“To drive Atlas away, you’ll be sleeping in my room.” (Naofumi)
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“To drive Atla away, you’ll be sleeping in my room.” (Naofumi)
   
“You wouldn’t!” (Atlas)
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“You wouldn’t!” (Atla)
   
“The thing your Atlas hates is?” (Naofumi)
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“The thing your Atla hates is?” (Naofumi)
   
“Ughh…Onii-sama, if you do that―” (Atlas)
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“Ughh…Onii-sama, if you do that―” (Atla)
   
   
Atlas emits a negative aura towards Fohl.
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Atla emits a negative aura towards Fohl.
   
   
“I-I got it! Nii-chan, I’ll work hard in order to punish Alta.” (Fohl)
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“I-I got it! Nii-chan, I’ll work hard in order to punish Atla.” (Fohl)
   
 
“Raphtalia is also fine with that, right?” (Naofumi)
 
“Raphtalia is also fine with that, right?” (Naofumi)
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“Why so sudden?” (Naofumi)
 
“Why so sudden?” (Naofumi)
   
“I promised him…” (Raphtalia)
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“I promised him….” (Raphtalia)
   
   
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When I think about it, it’s an inevitable result.
 
When I think about it, it’s an inevitable result.
   
Nevertheless, Firo’s punishment and Motoyasu’s reward, huh…
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Nevertheless, Firo’s punishment and Motoyasu’s reward, huh…..
   
 
Alright!
 
Alright!
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“No~!” (Firo)
 
“No~!” (Firo)
   
“Really, Father-in-Law!?” (Motoyasu)
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“Really, Father-in-Law?!” (Motoyasu)
   
   
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“Yes! Now then, Firo-tan. Let’s go on the date.” (Motoyasu)
 
“Yes! Now then, Firo-tan. Let’s go on the date.” (Motoyasu)
   
“““Buuuuuuuuu!””” (Kuu, Midori & Marine)
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“”“Buuuuuuuuu!””” (Kuu, Midori & Marine)
   
   

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