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“Rafu~” (Mii-kun)
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“Rafu~”
   
 
“Wha?” (Naofumi)
 
“Wha?” (Naofumi)
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“Fake~” (Mii-kun)
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“Fake~”
   
   
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Hmm?
 
Hmm?
   
Rato is glaring at me angrily.
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Rat is glaring at me angrily.
   
 
Behind her is a tanuki-ish raccoon, larger in size than Firo’s Filo Rial form. It looks like a bigger version of that other monster.
 
Behind her is a tanuki-ish raccoon, larger in size than Firo’s Filo Rial form. It looks like a bigger version of that other monster.
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Now that I think about it, I feel strangely refreshed.
 
Now that I think about it, I feel strangely refreshed.
   
It’s a strange feeling, like the one I had when fighting the Wrath Dragon.
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It’s a strange feeling, like that I had when fighting the Wrath Dragon.
   
…I’m getting a really bad premonition now.
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… I’m getting a really bad premonition now.
   
   
 
“Um… Naofumi-sama had his consciousness stolen by a cursed shield. Because of it, he became unable to use the slave crest… though that turned out for the best.” (Raphtalia)
 
“Um… Naofumi-sama had his consciousness stolen by a cursed shield. Because of it, he became unable to use the slave crest… though that turned out for the best.” (Raphtalia)
   
“…I see.” (Naofumi)
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“… I see.” (Naofumi)
   
   
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“So what exactly did I do?” (Naofumi)
 
“So what exactly did I do?” (Naofumi)
   
“What, you ask!?” (Rato)
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“What, you ask!?” (Rat)
   
   
Rato angles her eyebrows as she retorts.
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Rat angles her eyebrows as she retorts.
   
What? What did I do to make Rato this angry?
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What? What did I do to make Rat this angry?
   
   
 
“Yeah, please tell me in detail.” (Naofumi)
 
“Yeah, please tell me in detail.” (Naofumi)
   
“Marquis, for some absurd reason, you occupied my laboratory, arbitrarily transferred it to this island, and on top of that, you went around modifying my precious Mii-kun to your whim!” (Rato)
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“Marquis, for some absurd reason, you occupied my laboratory, arbitrarily transferred it to this island, and on top of that, you went around modifying my precious Mii-kun to your whim!” (Rat)
   
“Rafu~” (Mii-kun)
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“Rafu~”
   
   
In response to Rato’s scream, the large… raccoon?… behind Rato cries out.
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In response to Rat’s scream, the large… raccoon?… behind Rat cries out.
   
   
 
“Mii-kun was the monster you cared for in the test-tube, right? I modified him?” (Naofumi)
 
“Mii-kun was the monster you cared for in the test-tube, right? I modified him?” (Naofumi)
   
“Not only that. You preached about how you were going to purify the world, carried out questionable research, and proclaimed you were going to dominate the world.” (Rato)
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“Not only that. You preached about how you were going to purify the world, carried out questionable research, and proclaimed you were going to dominate the world.” (Rat)
   
 
“What!?” (Naofumi)
 
“What!?” (Naofumi)
   
“…Luckily, before you did anything you couldn’t take back, everyone worked together to stop you. It didn’t turn into anything serious.” (Rato)
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“… Luckily, before you did anything you couldn’t take back, everyone worked together to stop you. It didn’t turn into anything serious.” (Rat)
   
 
“I see.” (Naofumi)
 
“I see.” (Naofumi)
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“…I performed human experimentation on that group?” (Naofumi)
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“… I performed human experimentation on that group?” (Naofumi)
   
 
“Yes. Kiel-kun.” (Raphtalia)
 
“Yes. Kiel-kun.” (Raphtalia)
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But sensing her intent, Kiel changes her form.
 
But sensing her intent, Kiel changes her form.
   
…It’s a small puppy with three heads. Cerberus?
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… It’s a small puppy with three heads. Cerberus?
   
 
But since Kiel is the base, I get more of a Kielberus impression from it.
 
But since Kiel is the base, I get more of a Kielberus impression from it.
   
   
“Eh?” (Naofumi)
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“Eh?”
   
 
“When I begged him for it, Niichan happily did it for me.” (Kiel)
 
“When I begged him for it, Niichan happily did it for me.” (Kiel)
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“What about the others?” (Naofumi)
 
“What about the others?” (Naofumi)
   
“…The slaves undergoing treatment in the lab all became your test subjects, and…” (Raphtalia)
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“… The slaves undergoing treatment in the lab all became your test subjects, and…” (Raphtalia)
   
   
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“They all underwent complete recoveries. After that, you modified them as per their own request, and they rushed into battle against us.” (Raphtalia)
 
“They all underwent complete recoveries. After that, you modified them as per their own request, and they rushed into battle against us.” (Raphtalia)
   
“…What?” (Naofumi)
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“… What?” (Naofumi)
   
 
“At the moment, like Firo’s group, they are under our protection.” (Raphtalia)
 
“At the moment, like Firo’s group, they are under our protection.” (Raphtalia)
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“Your charisma while under that curse was amazing. Everyone desperately tried to protect you.” (Ren)
 
“Your charisma while under that curse was amazing. Everyone desperately tried to protect you.” (Ren)
   
“…That’s right. For some reason, Naofumi-san is always the target of everyone’s affections.” (Itsuki)
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“… That’s right. For some reason, Naofumi-san is always the target of everyone’s affections.” (Itsuki)
   
   
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“They’re the last remaining traces of the monsters that chose to follow you, mixed with a completely new race of monster you created, of course. They’re the first generation Raph race.” (Rato)
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“They’re the last remaining traces of the monsters that chose to follow you, mixed with a completely new race of monster you created, of course. They’re the first generation Raph race.” (Rat)
   
 
“Say what!?” (Naofumi)
 
“Say what!?” (Naofumi)
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“Fake~” (Raph)
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“Fake~”
   
   
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When I ask that, Sadina comes over, waving her hand. She gives a muffled laugh.
 
When I ask that, Sadina comes over, waving her hand. She gives a muffled laugh.
   
…Why is she brown? She’s also become relatively fluffy.
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… Why is she brown? She’s also become relatively fluffy.
   
   
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“Are you alright?” (Naofumi)
 
“Are you alright?” (Naofumi)
   
“According to Rato-chan, it’s fixable. I’ll be fine.” (Sadina)
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“According to Rat-chan, it’s fixable. I’ll be fine.” (Sadina)
   
   
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“And, in the end, what are we going to do with those monsters?” (Naofumi)
 
“And, in the end, what are we going to do with those monsters?” (Naofumi)
   
“They themselves wished for those forms, so… can’t we just introduce them to the world as new races?” (Rato)
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“They themselves wished for those forms, so… can’t we just introduce them to the world as new races?” (Rat)
   
   
Rato replies with a defeated expression.
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Rat replies with a defeated expression.
   
   
“By the way, the strange Marquis named them Raph race, Tali race, Rafuta race, Riya Race, and Talia race, or something like that, it seems.” (Rato)
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“By the way, the strange Marquis named them Raph race, Tali race, Rafuta race, Riya Race, and Talia race, or something like that, it seems.” (Rat)
   
   
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“Wait a second, you called those the first generation, right? Is there a second?” (Naofumi)
 
“Wait a second, you called those the first generation, right? Is there a second?” (Naofumi)
   
“Of course there is. It goes all the way up to seven. You remade a new generation every day, Marquis. What’s more, you made battle models, final weapon models, and some other specialized ones. They got closer and closer in appearance to Raphtalia-san, and it got harder for us to fight them.” (Rato)
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“Of course there is. It goes all the way up to seven. You remade a new generation every day, Marquis. What’s more, you made battle models, final weapon models, and some other specialized ones. They got closer and closer in appearance to Raphtalia-san, and it got harder for us to fight them.” (Rat)
   
   
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“Rafu~” (Raph Specimen)
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“Rafu~”
   
 
“This is the seventh generation.” (Taniko)
 
“This is the seventh generation.” (Taniko)
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“I don’t know what became of the eighth generation. There may be one exactly like the original walking around.” (Rato)
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“I don’t know what became of the eighth generation. There may be one exactly like the original walking around.” (Rat)
   
   
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“W-what?” (Naofumi)
 
“W-what?” (Naofumi)
   
“What happens after we overcome the Wave?” (Raphtalia)
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“What happens after we overcome the wave?” (Raphtalia)
   
 
“I go home?” (Naofumi)
 
“I go home?” (Naofumi)
   
“…Yes.” (Raphtalia)
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“… Yes.” (Raphtalia)
   
   
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“Anyways… the one who’s going to be compensating for all the damage done in this incident is me, right?” (Naofumi)
 
“Anyways… the one who’s going to be compensating for all the damage done in this incident is me, right?” (Naofumi)
   
“Yup.” (Ren)
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“Yup.”
   
   
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“Luckily, a portion of the research the strange Naofumi-sama conducted was picked up by Rato.” (Raphtalia)
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“Luckily, a portion of the research the strange Naofumi-sama conducted was picked up by Rat.” (Raphtalia)
   
 
“It was full of things I wanted to do. With this, my own research should take great leaps. Though I feel a bit regretful for using it.” (Rato)
 
“It was full of things I wanted to do. With this, my own research should take great leaps. Though I feel a bit regretful for using it.” (Rato)
   
“Rafu~” (Mii-kun)
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“Rafu~”
   
   
Mii-kun… was it?… puts Rato on his shoulders and begins walking off.
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Mii-kun… was it?… puts Rat on his shoulders and begins walking off.
   
   
“If you didn’t lend this child power, I still think he would have fought. You gave him a first generation Raph body, but he begged you for further strength, so you made him a special ‘Final Weapon’ body.” (Rato)
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“If you didn’t lend this child power, I still think he would have fought. You gave him a first generation Raph body, but he begged you for further strength, so you made him a special ‘Final Weapon’ body.” (Rat)
   
 
“I see… didn’t you want his body to function on the same system as Dragon cores? Something about versatility?” (Naofumi)
 
“I see… didn’t you want his body to function on the same system as Dragon cores? Something about versatility?” (Naofumi)
   
“It appears that you already did that.” (Rato)
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“It appears that you already did that.” (Rat)
   
 
“Oh, really…” (Naofumi)
 
“Oh, really…” (Naofumi)
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Ah, for the love of… What exactly was I doing!?
 
Ah, for the love of… What exactly was I doing!?
   
…Mii-kun, was it?
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… Mii-kun, was it?
   
 
The word of his betrayal irritates me.
 
The word of his betrayal irritates me.
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However this one made use of my insanity to strengthen himself.
 
However this one made use of my insanity to strengthen himself.
   
From the start, he was an ally of Rato and no friend to me. It’s understandable, but unsatisfying.
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From the start, he was an ally of Rat and no friend to me. It’s understandable, but unsatisfying.
   
   
“Rafu~” (Mii-kun)
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“Rafu~”
   
   
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“Eh? What? He made you a test subject, and asked for experimental consent, but never asked you to swear loyalty?” (Rato)
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“Eh? What? He made you a test subject, and asked for experimental consent, but never asked you to swear loyalty?” (Rat)
   
 
“…” (Naofumi)
 
“…” (Naofumi)
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Ah, right. I think Rato told me before that he was greedy for power.
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Ah, right. I think Rat told me before that he was greedy for power.
   
 
It was the other me’s fault for not understanding his personality.
 
It was the other me’s fault for not understanding his personality.
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“Rato-san appears to be angry at Naofumi-sama, but she’s truly quite thankful.” (Raphtalia)
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“Rat-san appears to be angry at Naofumi-sama, but she’s truly quite thankful.” (Raphtalia)
   
 
“I see. I hope all’s well that ends well, but…” (Naofumi)
 
“I see. I hope all’s well that ends well, but…” (Naofumi)
   
   
…I’m going to unload a few things.
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… I’m going to unload a few things.
   
 
It seems I went too far in various things.
 
It seems I went too far in various things.
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How should I say this? It seems that quite a soap opera played out when I wasn’t looking.
 
How should I say this? It seems that quite a soap opera played out when I wasn’t looking.
   
The rebellious Fohl is now this obedient to Raphtalia.
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The rebellious Fohl now is this obedient to Raphtalia.
   
 
Will they marry when they grow up? I don’t approve of it, by the way.
 
Will they marry when they grow up? I don’t approve of it, by the way.
   
   
“…Naofumi-sama? Are you thinking something sinister right now?” (Raphtalia)
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“… Naofumi-sama? Are you thinking something sinister right now?” (Raphtalia)
   
 
“About what?” (Naofumi)
 
“About what?” (Naofumi)
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Anyways, it seems Fohl became Raphtalia’s younger brother (Follower).
 
Anyways, it seems Fohl became Raphtalia’s younger brother (Follower).
   
…But I think her real age is lower than his.
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… But I think her real age is lower than his.
   
 
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