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“Then do me next! I’ll fight to pay it off!” (Kiel)
 
“Then do me next! I’ll fight to pay it off!” (Kiel)
   
“…Kiel-chan, this Onee-san doesn’t think you should rely on Naofumi-chan’s power too much.” (Sadina)
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“… Kiel-chan, this Onee-san doesn’t think you should rely on Naofumi-chan’s power too much.” (Sadina)
   
 
“It’s okay, Sadina-oneechan. I just want to become stronger.” (Kiel)
 
“It’s okay, Sadina-oneechan. I just want to become stronger.” (Kiel)
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Kiel’s level is actually on the higher side. But she hasn’t achieved overwhelming strength like Raphtalia.
 
Kiel’s level is actually on the higher side. But she hasn’t achieved overwhelming strength like Raphtalia.
   
She learned the basics of Ki later than the rest, so you could say she’s a step behind the traitors.
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She learned the basics of Chi later than the rest, so you could say she’s a step behind the traitors.
   
As with Rato’s monster, I put Kiel into a culture tank, and close the lid before activating my ability.
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As with Rat’s monster, I put Kiel into a culture tank, and close the lid before activating my ability.
   
   
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“…Then after looking over Kiel-chan and Firo-chan, I’m going to go on patrol again.” (Sadina)
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“… Then after looking over Kiel-chan and Firo-chan, I’m going to go on patrol again.” (Sadina)
   
 
“Yeah, hop to it.” (Naofumi)
 
“Yeah, hop to it.” (Naofumi)
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I watch the scene play out on a screen from a distance. I’ll be able to direct the battle.
 
I watch the scene play out on a screen from a distance. I’ll be able to direct the battle.
   
Oh? Is that nit Rato among the fake party?
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Oh? Is that nit Rat among the fake party?
   
 
I thought she was a non-combatant. What is she doing here?
 
I thought she was a non-combatant. What is she doing here?
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“Yeah, if I went all out, it wouldn’t be impossible; but these are Naofumi’s comrades. If we’re careless, we may put their lives in danger.” (Ren)
 
“Yeah, if I went all out, it wouldn’t be impossible; but these are Naofumi’s comrades. If we’re careless, we may put their lives in danger.” (Ren)
   
“…How troublesome.” (Itsuki)
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“… How troublesome.” (Itsuki)
   
   
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Upon the fake’s words, the Heroes, Rishia, Rato, and the others nod.
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Upon the fake’s words, the Heroes, Rishia, Rat, and the others nod.
   
 
Perhaps they infiltrated the last one like this as well.
 
Perhaps they infiltrated the last one like this as well.
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The barrier-forming device is around the center of this one.
 
The barrier-forming device is around the center of this one.
   
…It glows, so perhaps that gives away its location.
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… It glows, so perhaps that gives away its location.
   
   
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Ren stands before Motoyasu, and the rest of them proceed.
 
Ren stands before Motoyasu, and the rest of them proceed.
   
They’re both Heroes, on approximately even footing. This battle will be decided by how Motoyasu’s Three contribute.
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They’re both heroes, on approximately even footing. This battle will be decided by how Motoyasu’s three contribute.
   
   
“Are you up for it? This is getting to be a pain.” (Filo Rial)
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“Are you up for it? This is getting to be a pain.”
   
“Mo-kun seems motivated, so we’ll have to do a bit of work.” (Filo Rial)
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“Mo-kun seems motivated, so we’ll have to do a bit of work.”
   
“Yeah. Or else Motoyasu-san will be troubled.” (Filo Rial)
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“Yeah. Or else Motoyasu-san will be troubled.”
   
   
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“Kyua!” (Gaelion)
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“Kyua!”
   
   
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“Rafu~!” (Raph)
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“Rafu~!”
   
“Rafu!” (Raph)
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“Rafu!”
   
 
“They’re coming one after the other!”
 
“They’re coming one after the other!”
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“…Melty-chan is angry!” (Raphtalia)
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“… Melty-chan is angry!” (Raphtalia)
   
 
“If Melty-chan were to meet Master now, I think she would accept him.” (Firo)
 
“If Melty-chan were to meet Master now, I think she would accept him.” (Firo)
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“Hero of the Bow-san, Rishia-san, and Rato-san. Are you ready?” (Raphtalia)
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“Hero of the Bow-san, Rishia-san, and Rat-san. Are you ready?” (Raphtalia)
   
 
“Yes.” (Itsuki)
 
“Yes.” (Itsuki)
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“Fuee… I never thought I would end up fighting Firo-chan.” (Rishia)
 
“Fuee… I never thought I would end up fighting Firo-chan.” (Rishia)
   
“Yes, I’m ready.” (Rato)
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“Yes, I’m ready.” (Rat)
   
   
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Atlas doesn’t trace objects with her eyes. She follows them by sensing their Ki.
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Atlas doesn’t trace objects with her eyes. She follows them by sensing their chi.
   
 
She runs after and thrusts at the hidden fake.
 
She runs after and thrusts at the hidden fake.

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