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I crawl out of bed and leave the room.
 
I crawl out of bed and leave the room.
   
I do some random stretches, and quietly walk through the village, listening to the quiet sound of the waves.
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I randomly do some stretches, and quietly walk through the village, listening to the quiet sound of the waves.
   
 
I’m heading towards the Camping Plant house Ren is currently staying in.
 
I’m heading towards the Camping Plant house Ren is currently staying in.
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Ah, by the way, Gaelion’s Dragon Sanctuary has already been set up.
 
Ah, by the way, Gaelion’s Dragon Sanctuary has already been set up.
   
When I asked him what the maintenance cost was, he said something like once it has been activated, the spell permanently made an anti-teleportation area until he dispelled it.
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When I asked him what the maintenance cost was, he said something like once it had been activated once, the spell permanently made an anti-teleportation area until he dispelled it.
   
 
But as soon as the magic was activated, the Filo Rial ran away at an alarming pace.
 
But as soon as the magic was activated, the Filo Rial ran away at an alarming pace.
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The plants have been altered to take certain commands from me, and I can create a passageway anywhere.
 
The plants have been altered to take certain commands from me, and I can create a passageway anywhere.
   
Only me and Rato know of it. It’s a secret function.
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Only me and Rat know of it. It’s a secret function.
   
   
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“That’s what I should be saying.” (Femals Knight)
 
“That’s what I should be saying.” (Femals Knight)
   
“Well, the Camping Plant was an innovation made by me and Rato. What about you?” (Naofumi)
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“Well, the Camping Plant was an innovation made by me and Rat. What about you?” (Naofumi)
   
   
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Energy and Magic.
 
Energy and Magic.
   
She can see the flow of power known as magic, and can utilize it.
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She can see the flow of the power known as magic, and can utilize it.
   
 
Though there’s probably some differences.
 
Though there’s probably some differences.
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Rafatalia called it something like Ying Yang Blade.
 
Rafatalia called it something like Ying Yang Blade.
   
I thought it was a strange technique. So this person taught it to her.
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I thought it was a strange technique. So this person taught it to her
   
 
I guess she’s also a genius. And she isn’t neglecting hard work. Even though her status is low, she manages to hold her ground all the same.
 
I guess she’s also a genius. And she isn’t neglecting hard work. Even though her status is low, she manages to hold her ground all the same.
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“Hm? So you were a criminal?” (Naofumi)
 
“Hm? So you were a criminal?” (Naofumi)
   
“If that were the case, I would've never been chosen to become a knight. Though my status has fallen.” (Female Knight)
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“If that were the case, I would never be chosen to become a knight. Though my status has fallen.” (Female Knight)
   
   
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“What?” (Naofumi)
 
“What?” (Naofumi)
   
“I’m the daughter of the person who used to be the lord of this land. Though I say that, I was away at the castle for a long time training to become a knight. I never spent much time here, so my memories of this place are vague.” (Female Knight)
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“I’m the daughter of the person who used to be the lord of this land. Though I say that, I was away at the castle for a long time training to be a knight. I never spent much time here, so my memories of the place are vague.” (Female Knight)
   
 
“Ah… I see.” (Naofumi)
 
“Ah… I see.” (Naofumi)
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Were they planning to execute her and all of those in support of Demi-Humans along with me when I was caught?
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Were they planning to execute her and all of those in support of Demi-Humans along with me when they caught me?
   
The Church of the Three Heroes did hold resentment towards Demi-Humans so perhaps that would have happened if we lost.
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The Three Hero Church did hold resentment towards Demi-Humans so perhaps that would have happened if we lost.
   
 
Trash seems to have a deep-seeded hatred as well, so that’s a likely possibility.
 
Trash seems to have a deep-seeded hatred as well, so that’s a likely possibility.
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Inversely, Atlas agrees to whatever I do, and it’s hard to contain her.
 
Inversely, Atlas agrees to whatever I do, and it’s hard to contain her.
   
I can’t control myself very well, so it’s difficult for me to deal with that type of person.
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I can’t control myself well, so it’s difficult for me to deal with that type of person.
   
 
She seems to see an illusion that everything that I do is just.
 
She seems to see an illusion that everything that I do is just.
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…This is not good.
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… This is no good.
   
 
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